Reviewed By: Shadow-wolf On: May 08, 2004 11:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed reading this story please continue. It has the makings of a great short story or first chapter to a novel. Thank you and keep writing.
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