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| "Aqua" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: To Kara
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 18:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh sorry I didn't realize that some of the words had melded together. Thanks for letting me know. I hope my future works are more to your liking
| Reviewed By: Kara Angitia On: May 05, 2004 10:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh darn! And you'd done so well with your other two stories (Train Stop Angel and the other one whose name I can't remmeber)what the heck is this! I can barely read this, I know you can do better you've proved this. I reccomend that you go back and fix all the grammar problems, some words have meleded together, it even looks as if some words have been left out. Good luck
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