| "Something To Be Afraid Of" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: something to be afraid of
Reviewed By: chubbygirl On: April 01, 2012 07:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemon is FANTASTIC and SPECTACULAR, however please carry on with story up to 20 chapters at least i want to know if bulma and goku will end up as happy couple. will it? |
Reviewed By: The Evil WOOHOO [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, so ive read a whole lot of your fics. you are, by far, the most talented writer here! wow, ok. so, ha. i think a sequal should be in the works.. someday? this is good and it leaves a very nice cliffhanger.. although cliffhangers sorta suck balls... oh well. great writing, as always.
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 10:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sequal, Sequal, Sequal, SEQUAL!!! PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: Black Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 19:16 EST
Comment/Review:
omg i love this
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Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 25, 2004 17:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this fic, it was good, if a little twisted. I always hated it when Goku played the bad guy. He's always so sweet. Anyway, The only part I had trouble with was Goku's attitude towards his sons, and Chichi's "weak" influence on them. I thought that that was a little silly, but hey! it's your fic! I liked how you made Bulma gradually give in to Goku. Very nice. Hope you write a sequel to this fic. Maybe Bulma can bring Vegeta back with the dragons balls, and he'll be strong enough to kick Goku's ass! That would make a VERY interesting Part 2. I know I'd read it. Happy Writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Latia On: September 29, 2004 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing, I've read before, but is great. Spelling and grammer very good, maybe a two or three mistakes, but not many. Creativity was great. You have a great imagination, much like mine as a story writer. I enjoyed the story, it had me all the way. Overall, I say the story was Vicious. There are not many fics out there that contain a story line based on Goku turning to Kakarot, or Goku/Bulma at that. So yeah, great story.
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 01:14 EDT
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Great job on this fic. I did think about Goku w/ Bulma...but i never really got intrested in reading any. It was always with Veget and Bulma. But this is a really nice change. It's really hard to imagin GOku evil thought, but i still like it, i mean he wouldn't be able to do all those things without being a bit evil...once question is where is Trunks and Bra in all of this? I guess i just never imagined that GOku would kill Vegeta. And the lemon was good too. Not that bad...haha. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Aegis On: June 01, 2004 13:24 EDT
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I absolutely hate it!!! sorry.. i mean you write very good and all but i don´t like the story.. i´ve always liked only v/b and cc/g, things are fine just the way they are.. :( and i can´t stand the fact that so many people think bulma is the perfect woman that all men want!! like if she were a goddess or something.. anyway you´re a good writer, keep going, write some other stories too.
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Reviewed By: ouchmysquealyscortch On: May 08, 2004 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You simply must update this fic! I demand it!
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Title: dis ain't my loving Goku
Reviewed By: DBZ Maniac On: May 08, 2004 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soz 2 b critical but it was 2 fast and rushed and goku was mean thats so bas :'( but it was good regardless and not a crapp yaoi fic
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Reviewed By: InvaderZimismine! On: May 04, 2004 08:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayness yayness!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 07:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW great story.i hope that you can write the squel.to this story.you wrote it..and it's real good.man goku is an animal..and i can't wait to see how bulma gets even with him!!!so please write more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leonie On: May 04, 2004 06:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good! It worked pretty well as a one-shot but you could continue it! We all would like to know what Bulma's going to do!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: May 04, 2004 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty Good!
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Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, twisted Goku, I mean..Kakarot. Very nice to see this different side of him portrayed. A sequal would be nice, I bet you would keep us readers guessing at every turn. ^_^ Keep up the great work, you're by far my favorite fanfic writer!!
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