Title: White
Reviewed By: Lady_Readwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
a good ficlet. The narrative itself could stand to being developed a little more; something feels to be missing from the story. The image of these two strong, powerful captains of such affectionately crazy teams, sitting together, though, is a very nice image. Perhaps you will consider writing a follow-up piece to this story.
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