| "Chasing Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Chapter 7 Boxers or Briefs
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 (floretta) On: October 30, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, a chapter that has quite a bit of horror. I am so pleased. I can't wait to find out what Chiaki whispered to Takaya. Glad others are seeing how clueless Yuzura is I couldn't agree more with Haruie I want to smack that dense idiot upside his head as well. What kind of idiotic situation has stupid Crawford gotten himself into? Wouldn't Nagi be a grandson or something like that? What is that snake Kousaka up to? I loved the action. I loved the argument between Aya and Ran. Who knew Aya had such a potty mouth. I laughed so hard when Ran told her she was grounded and she responded he couldn't ground her she would move in with Nagi and the dirty sex comment had me on the floor. Me likes when you do humor. Poor Shu I can't believe Omi called him Ran. I also loved his comment about having shitty luck. Definitely looking forward to your next update. Might want to look over the chapter there were a few spelling errors otherwise this story rocks. Update!
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: October 30, 2004 13:57 CDT
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Oh,wow,what a great surprise to see TWO new chapters posted. I've really been enjoying this fanfic and was getting a little worried that you weren't going to continue. I adore the WK guys and pairing them with the Miraze of Blaze crew was a fabulous idea. There aren't enough stories based on M.O.B. posted on the Net to do them justice. Please keep up the wonderful job you're doing with this storyline. I like the interesting pairings. ^ _ ^
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Title: Your Takaya Chapter 6
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 (floretta) On: October 26, 2004 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting enough to keep me coming back. I was suprised this was a mostly MoB chapter since this is a crossover with Weiss. I was somewhat disappointed I didn't find out what happened with Omi and Schu. I do question how dense Yuzuru is. I also am surprised about how clueless Takaya is . He's end for a rude awakening if he thinks remembering Kagetora's feelings for Naoe will help kindle sexual feelings within him for Naoe. I expected more from the ending. Otherwise I have no complaints. I can't wait for the action to heat up. I am looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Wilyfox34 On: July 01, 2004 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter did seem to be more about Naoe and Takaya. I'm not complaining since I'm a hugh fan of MoB. I noticed in your author's note you thought that you maybe had made Takaya ooc. I disagree. I think you did a wonderful job with his confusion. I remember the ending of the MoB series the sadness, the longing, and the desire to understand that Takaya had when Naoe left him standing on the docks. I feel that's the part that you addressed and I for one am glad. His mental state was definately not as it would usually be so your written portrayal wouldn't be occ but more situational like you suggested. Looking forward to the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: Chatte On: May 21, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Nods head viciously* Yeah, I couldn't agree with you more. MoB IS really under appreciated! T_T *sigh* If only there would be more writers like you and all the writers in the MoB section in this site!! Anyway, Keep up the good work! Normally I'm not a big fan of crossovers, but hey! If it has anything to do with Naoe and Takaya then I'm all for it! Besides, I like the way this story is turning out, though I must say the pairings so far are really surprising! Chiaki and Takaya? I never saw that coming! Still, the more drama there is, the better the story! Don't wait to long to post the third chapter!! ^_~`
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Reviewed By: TG On: May 17, 2004 14:40 CDT
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Please continue. I think you're doing a great job combining MoB and WK in your story. And poor Yuzuru. *pats his head* He's always so clueless. But that's what makes him so endearing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Floretta On: May 14, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Being a fan of both MoB and Weiss Kreuz I was rather surprised to were able to think of a crossover. After reading the first 2 chapters I was glad I found this fic. I often search the web for fanfiction for MoB in English. There is so little out there because you are correct that it is underapreciated, but I'm a huge fan. I'm glad I came over to mediaminer and found this story. Looking forward to the next chapter update.
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