| "That's All" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: blackroseyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a great story. It was making me feel all warm inside and then I read the ending and it seriously made me cry! I've read other deathfics but none moved me like this. You are so great! (bows down).
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Title: So sad!!!!!
Reviewed By: peachy On: April 08, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! When I first saw this on fanfiction.net, I thought it would be a happy story, and I was wrong! It was soooo sad!!!! I seriously cried!!!!!! But it was such a beautiful and wonderful story...I'm going to cry now!! A perfect sad story...wonderful job!!!
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Reviewed By: gothic rose On: June 03, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww..please don't cry..it was a great fic! I wanna know how Dee died!
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Reviewed By: ookami kunno On: May 28, 2004 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey that was a great fic, I loved it despite the said ending.
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: May 15, 2004 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG, that was so sad. I made the mistake of reading it before work the other day and I was teary-eyed all day. When I got home I bawled like a baby just thinking about it. Dee & Ryo are my favorite yaoi couple so whenever something sad happens to them in a fanfic it makes me sad too. It was a GREAT story, though. Keep up the good work and write some more stuff for FAKE. You seem to have a feel for the characters. If you write the stories then I will read them. ^_^
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Title: Waaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Reviewed By: katastrophic88 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's soo sad! i want more! please write another chapter!!! How old was Ryo when he died too, thats what i want to know! keep up the good work -kat
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