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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 12:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should keep this going.. great plot...to see if the nemaks let vegeta grant a wish makes eveyone whom read this come back for more..hope you continue this soon..
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Title: mlf
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow so sad.but i would like to think that vegeta had changed all those years he and bulma was together,we can't just say that he's the same.he loves his kids and family and there 'll has to be a way that he shows them and them only...update soon..maria
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Title: touching
Reviewed By: Anonymous girl On: August 05, 2004 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved how you brought Vegeta's emotional side out and also mentioned his dark side too. I like it when a character acts out of text but still keeps its character. Good job!
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Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 16:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! awsome plot!!! i can't wait until the next chapter! i hope you update soon!
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