| "Perfect Pain and Suffering" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (NLI) On: August 14, 2005 03:24 CDT
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Bwahaha, me likey! More! More! More! Yes I know I'm hyper, lol. Interesting, not bad, more details might be better though. As for sadistic psychos, not sadistic enough, but definitely a good attempt. Eh, what do I know I hardly even write lemons myself. Though I have read say a few handfuls, ok fine I admit it, I probably read a lot more than that, heh heh. ^^; but like I said more details! Elaborate, maybe more bondage stuff. But not necessarily required. Anyways, hope you'll continue this. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: HikariArchai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic...The conflict between whether or not Bakura cares is real interesting...I hope it's the first chapter...
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: January 28, 2005 22:41 CST
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IT rock! Totally new way to look at it. Either Bakura's evil or he really loves him and the sex is mutal. Ga really nice story and I really hope you continue. There's this one story "I didn't understand" and it's pretty good and similar to yours. Check it out. Up date soon. Thank You. DK;)
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:31 CST
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Hmm... This was interesing... To say the least... But it was a little confusing... I am trying to figure out whether or not Yami no Bakura regretted his actions ar whether or not this was routine for them... All in all I didn't really mind it but it did leave me rather confused... Perhaps adding another chapter would help things along. Cause seriously, it wasn't all that bad.
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Reviewed By: iloveryouandbakura On: September 11, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please make another chapter i want to know what happens.you better have bakura and ryou together and i don't just mean in the sex
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: Hmmm... On: June 08, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs a bit more zing to it.........but it is fine nonetheless.
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Reviewed By: Nancy11 On: May 22, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay i loved your story! it was very well done, go you
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 17, 2004 15:41 CDT
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Not bad, not bad at all. You should write longer ones. I guess that is the only critism to give. If you do please post. I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: May 13, 2004 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Please write more soon!
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