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Reviewed By: catch-katch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just finished reading it all- all in all i declared this story AWESOME. i loved it. the ending was fine the way it is, i don't think you nessisarily have to expand apon it. maybe you should just leave it as it is as change the fic setting to "complete". that might encourage more people to read it if they have the added insentive of a complete story (that would encourage me any way, it's annoying if you find a great fic and have to end up waiting for months and months for it to finish). some parts i liked best- the communicating with heero at the beginning, that part were trowa uses his talent to type in the comp, i just thought it sounded cool and was well-phrased, and also heero's and duo's first proper kiss. very cute and dramatic ^^.
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Reviewed By: catch-katch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, i just read the first... four chapters. i love it! the summary and the idea behind it sounded interesting so i checked it out, but i was a little sceptical when i found out that heero was blind, deaf AND mute, but you proved me wrong. i love the way they communicate and how heero didn't recognise duo because he didn't feel his braid. it was so cute and realistic and so well written when he smiled when he felt it. great idea and great writing in general. can't wait to read the rest, i just thought i'd post a review about my initial views. keep it up ^^
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 08:34 CST
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Great story! *shoots J in left pinky toe*
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 16:10 CST
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*shoots J in his left big toe* Damn old man always making things difficult. Please update soon.
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Title: Pinball
Reviewed By: narutofan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't waite to read the next chapter or even your next story. Update or add soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess(too lazy ta sign in) On: October 22, 2004 21:15 CDT
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that was great man. i usually only read R and up cause they tend to be a better read, but i really like this one :d now to go see about other fics. ja ne P.S. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: avidfan On: October 22, 2004 07:42 CDT
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I know a site you might like, you google image search "Heero" and there's to pictures that look like cartoon strips. Click on one of them and it brings you to Madamehydra it has a bunch of fics with same/similar pairings but much, much more detail
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 19, 2004 19:22 CDT
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Ahhh! If only real life was like that! All the problems easily gottem rid off! *sighs* If only court procedures were that easy. Never the less I like this fic. Update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Justkat - really On: October 15, 2004 16:51 CDT
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Nice. Thanks Neire
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 07:46 CDT
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Wow...all those dishy bishies sleeping under the one roof...the mind boggles. Thanks Neire.^^
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Title: Pinball
Reviewed By: Lee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I have read yet. I look forward to the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: Kelkatan On: July 17, 2004 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is and interesting twist, and I'm finding it very enjoyable to read. You are a very good writer, and it shows. Please update soon! Tanya
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Title: Pinball
Reviewed By: Tashia On: July 15, 2004 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapie.Keep up the good work and Update soon
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Title: Ch 11
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 06:49 CDT
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Yaaayyy...Duo saves the day! That's my (sorry...our) Shinigami! Nice work.^^
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Title: Pinball
Reviewed By: Tashia On: July 09, 2004 12:49 CDT
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Im liking the story please update soon.I want to see what happenes when everyone gets there to help them.Keep up the good work.
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