| "Jenetikku no Youko" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool idea, although it's hard to tell when so little has happened. I can tell your writing would be even better in your native language. If you go back to edit this chapter, look at the tenses, because a few words are present tense while most of the story is past tense. You are very good at english, I think. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome plz update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it rocks and your english isn't that bad compared to my sister's it's the best. Sango16: what my spelling is not that bad. Lady Vaoh: *sarcastically* yeah sure keep thinking that. Anyway, if you think that it isn't good enough then find a beta reader who can check your spelling and stuff. I hope that you update soon but seeing that you haven't in a couple of months make me sad *sighs sadly* Sango16: Hello!? Why exactly is my spelling bad. Hello talk to me! Lady Vaoh: *holds up a sign* (it says) don't interrupt me while I'm ignoring you. S16: WHAT!?!?!?! Lady Vaoh: Oh no, well seeya and once again I'm praying that you'll update. *starts to run as her sister chases her* Sincerely your new reader, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
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Title: cool!!!!
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is such a good idea I really hope you run with it. only one chapter and you have me hooked the blood thing was really cool.....
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 23:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I like this one! And you haven't updated in a long time. Please update soon!
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Title: Niftyness
Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 03:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm quite amazed, but also mourning the fact that it's not recently updated. *cries*
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this is good, and your english is not that bad, my spellings worse and its my native language. I realy think you should write more on this, its verry good.
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