| "Twins" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: chapter1-12
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta update, pleeaaaase!! you just left it there... i want to know what happens!!! *has a crazed fit about it*..... ok, i'm calm... please update, i love this fic, you can't just leave it there... unless you got a writters block... O_o
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I don't know how you could leave me hanging! This is pretty good, I hope you finish it soon.
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Title: Chapters 1 thru 12
Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 19:37 CST
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Even though this started as a RP, it's fairly consistent in its tone and characterization. At least until chapter 12, which takes into account the chizzari fics and Vegeta suddenly starts reverting to his true Saiyan character. The human influence on his behavior really came through in the earlier chapters, and now it seems he's just full of Saiyan-ness and no humanity. Believable, I think, considering he's about to be daddy to a full-blooded Saiyan and once again has a Saiyan mate. Still, it's rather sudden and could do with a bit of fleshing out (my roundabout way of asking for an update ;-) ). I do so want Goku's POV!
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Reviewed By: BlissfullyOblivious On: October 02, 2005 16:21 CDT
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This is a great fic! I got hooked as soon as I started, please continue soon! I can't wait to find out what Vegeta will do, ooh, suspenseful.
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Title: Twins[the entire Chizzari Series]
Reviewed By: achillona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's original...and I've read it thrice...please continue all of your fics. I have a fondness for continuations. Your fics are a ten course meal...as well as the dessert! Twins is wonderful...I love your interpretation of the dbz universe...I sincerely hope he and his 'Chizzari' resolve thier issues...and the betrayal ... I hope the prince recovers ... This is so wonderful and wonderfilled... ~anz~
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Title: Gathering
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god, here we go now! Of all people to call, did it have to be the stupid harpy bitch! And Bulma's supposed to be the smartest woman on the planet! Poor V/G! MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Ginia2 On: October 03, 2004 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that I was encourage to read this this evening! Thank you Jewel! This rp by Princes Jewel and Dark Sephy is simply delightful. Now that it is several hours past my bedtime, I think I'll go have some lemony MVegeta and Goku dreams....
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: August 25, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story!!!!!!Your writeing is very addicting.Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Title: Chappie 8
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plyric *is on a reviewing-marathon!* This story is, of course, on my favorites. Well, gee, look who the author is?! ;) Anywho, poor Kaky! Poor Vegeta! Beat all those idiots up, Vegeta! Protect your sweetums!
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Reviewed By: gokumum On: June 18, 2004 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look at the very little amount of reviews and just shake my head: lazy butts!!! You wonder why authors get fed up with posting fics here, and you are just too lazy to leave 2 lines of comment after reading such a gorgeous fic!!! Well, I really enjoy this little piece of fiction, I love mpregs and the ki-binders....yeah... it is a treat! *smiles* keep on the good work!
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Reviewed By: orange_saiyan On: May 16, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad story...
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