| "Awkward Situation" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: Evil Quarte tehee...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 09, 2008 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun, fun! I coulden't stop laughing when Duo and Heero thought Trowa had *Thunked* Quarte tehee. A very fun read, but a little abrupt at places, mostly the scene change in chapter 1. In the store and magically out of it...? Overall an enjoyable read, good work! XD
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Reviewed By: ta On: November 12, 2005 00:24 CST
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you made quatre so evil and not so innocent
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 22:59 CST
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*Laughing hysterically.* THAT IS SO GREAT! IT WAS ALL A JOKE! *Continues to laugh ass off.* I love the suprise ending you gave it! "Fun to make him blush.." That was so funny! Thank you for finally finishing this and making it so funny!
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 15:35 CDT
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That was really good. First time writing one, huh? Doesn`t seem like it.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 19, 2004 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS CHAPTER WAS AWSOM PLEASE UPDATE.. NOW
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 18:11 CDT
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That was great lol. I love the stoey a lot what fun that was. Quat is a devil.Poor Trowa and Duo and wufei what Quat put them though was just Evil. LOL that was so funny in the end and when theyall tired to explain it.Great fic and good look with all ur other ones.
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 19, 2004 15:57 CDT
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HAHA!!! Ohh HO HO OHH lol Quat is a sneak devil!! yes it was he and trowa's first time but he makes it clear that it wasn't his first sexual experience and he put them all through it because he knew that they thought him virginal lol GO QUAT!! *snickers* that was good. and Heero knew other wise huh *snickers* was there a little 1x4 action before heero hooked up with Duo?! Or maybe Quat confided in him.
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Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: October 19, 2004 15:43 CDT
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*decides to do a play by play of her reactions to the story* 'Quatre had played the trust card, that was low.' hahaha.. go Quat.'The squeaking continued.' *collasps on top of her folded arms and laughs so hard...* oh goodness '"Put some pants on."' Nature boy!! lol *makes it to chapter five and screams while clapping* AHH yes!!! lol Wu Fei you go u scholarly boy u!!
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: priscel--- On: October 19, 2004 15:22 CDT
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It's a perfect opening, Duo jumping into his loves' arms. *GRINS blissfully looking somewhat idiotic gazing at the computer screen while lost in her thoughts* contortionist LOL... POOR trowa!! lol Quat is so cute, no wonder everyone likes to make him all virginal.
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Title: ch1
Reviewed By: priscel *appears suddenly* On: October 19, 2004 15:10 CDT
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Why does everyone assume that I'm on the bottom?"' lol... Can i answer it, he's so damn cute is part of the reason but I personal see him being flexible for either position. lol man Duo's all about loving and sex in this chapter... onward
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Reviewed By: j_mame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! loved an too innocent Quatre, he just seems like such an angel.*sighs dreamily* fantastic job. bad wufei, sleeping with the enemy, but if the enemy always looked that good then i would too.^_^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: September 09, 2004 01:05 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok well I have to make this short because I'm off to Dallas children's Hospital again with Jillian..My 16 years old daughter so I just wanted to let you know I read your chapter and or update or story and enjoyed them very much!!! ... You see I had 27 chapters to read and review so I'm doing a mass review because I have to go back to Dallas. So Please update and I will read your next chapter and or update or story when I return from Dallas.And thanks for updating..Patty 40
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 21:11 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 21, 2004 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh I really enjoyed this chapter..Please update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 20, 2004 21:35 CDT
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OH! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry.
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