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| "Razor Wire Shrine" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Slate Grey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You get a comment here because I've just read through *all* of your fanfiction, here and at Soul Bonds and at your site and... yes. I'd comment on each one individually, but then I'd start reading them over again and people are already starting to wonder why I'm not answering the phone. *grins* In all seriousness, I love your style. All of it. Love the poetic and stream-of-conciousness elements that make the feelings come across so strongly, love the obsessiveness that both yamis and hikaris have for each other, and... yes. If you can think of another part of your writing, odds are that I love it. I'm particularly infatuated with your characterizations. Your Yami runs the gamut from strong protector to frightening predator, and yet remains startlingly in-character the whole time and *that* takes skill. Yow. Your Malik and Yami no Malik are likewise perfect, even if I couldn't tell you why, and your fics about them never fail to leave me vaguely unsettled and desperate for more. Bakura and Yami no Bakura are almost better off than the other two pairs, but still bittersweet enough to make it realistic and I love them all to death. Couldn't choose between them if I tried, and I'm glad I'll never have to. Right. I should stop now. This is getting rather long. Let's just leave it that I'll be haunting your page for updates for the foreseeable future... and also mediaminer. Oh, and Soul Bonds... and, actually, wherever else I can find them. *grins*
| Reviewed By: kura-ryouu-sama On: May 09, 2004 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
uhhh wow that was good u should write one like this with ryou and bakura-sama well g2g
| Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs dreamily* Lovely dark and bloody and sensual story. I absolutely love the way Yami no Yugi worships Yugi, and the way Yugi fears him so. It adds a nice touch to the story. Plus, I love stories about the beginning of the manga, Yami no Yugi is much more exciting then than when he's into Duel Monsters. Ja ne.
| Title: /Strega
Reviewed By: /Strega On: May 08, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Your use of description was very invoking and the Yami/Yugi relationship was very complex. I thought Yugi was crying because, while he had a certain set of morals he clung to....there was also a part of him that wanted the bully to die and for those whom hurt him to pay. Yami's actions, however much he may protest, were only the fulfillment of his own wishes. Yami was teh doer, but Yugi was the one who wanted it done....even if he wouldn't admit it to himself. Yami outside of Yugi's door, caressing the wood and basking in the warmth he felt was unsettling. As was his promise to keep Yugi safe and cared for. -Eck- He would be trapped forever in darkness, lost in a cage that was created for him out of love. Once again -eck!- You also explained Yami's attitude very eloquently. He called Yugi savior but then acted like he wanted to possess him like an object. I thought that confusing at first but, you were right, Yami thinks himself a God saved my a superior human. Yugi isn't just any mortal to him.....he was HIS. Anyway, the whole story was really interesting and provocative. I must also add that the seduction scene was well done....passionate, desperate, and dark. NICE. Hope to see more from you. Ja ne.
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