| "Rose Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update really soon
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Reviewed By: amishamj [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think you should make it a youko/kagome/kurama story instead of aternate endings
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Reviewed By: HieiKuramaluver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the plot seems pretty good, to start. There are problems though. The chapters are extremely short. They can't reall ybe called cxhapters - only two or three paragraphs long (if that much). You really need to proof read and check your spelling. Maybe you should get a beta to help you out...
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is turning out to be really good plz update soon
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Reviewed By: love it On: June 04, 2004 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 09:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting new chapters. plz update soon!!!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Kuramas Girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 23:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
U MUST UP DATE SOON!!!!ITS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!!!UPDATE SOOOOOOOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is an interesting fic. plz update soon. kag is with Yoko? and Hiei thinks of her as his sister? hmm. this will get fun!!!
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Title: Rose Dreams
Reviewed By: Dianna On: May 09, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are u going to update?Cause I can't wait for the next chapters.Hope it's soon!!
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Title: Cristina
Reviewed By: Gothic Youkai666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool. I cannot wait until chapter 2!!! IM me when you ahve it up. Stupid mm.org wouldn't let me log in, but I have a few stories from ff.net on here. Bye-bye
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Reviewed By: araem214 On: May 09, 2004 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE! (this is amskitty214 not logged in)
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