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| "demon tears for a human.......remade" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: AnimeAngel101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! its really cool and i love the fact that kagome is now a neko youkai
| Title: Charlotte
Reviewed By: Dezbo21@juno.com [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I\\\'m not saying that it is a bad story, it\\\'s just extremely hard to read. You\\\'re trying to write it more like a play and not even in the right format for that. You are writing this more like you are explaining the idea to another person, not like it is a story. If I were you, I go back through and rework the format before continuing with this. You might want to go over it more than once as well. There are several occasions where you will have a word spelled corectly, but it isn\\\'t the word you would want there. Ex: \\\'reed tipped ears\\\' should be \\\'red-tipped ears\\\' If you are serious about writing, you would understand that this is not a flame. I have made the nickname my e-mail so as not to be hiding. I truly believe what I have said, and it could be a good story, if it were actually written as one. That, and it is completely cliché. Try again, I\\\'m sure you could do a good job.
| Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was pretty good, but i defanitly dont thing its an R story, i have NC 17 and an R story and....well this is just no R story, its good but defanitly a PG13, anyway i like it, update soon? P.S. i have really bad spelling, lol ^_^'
| Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEZE UPDATE SOON ITS A REALLY COOL FIC SO FAR!
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