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Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 23:38 CST
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Holy shit! This is a awesome story! I really hope you continue this!! Update soon please!?!?
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 19:07 CDT
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man another good story left unfinished.
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Title: LOVEN IT
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! YOU JUST HAVE TO UPDATE PPPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 21:28 CDT
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OMg What a great story i love it soooooooo much and i cant wait to see what Sasuke and the others say to Naruto so update it soon ok thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: liankitty On: August 27, 2005 08:04 CDT
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This was a pretty interesting read, I'd really like to see where the story's headed. Bitchy Naruto chewing out his team mates and sensei is fun!
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Reviewed By: liankitty On: August 27, 2005 08:02 CDT
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This was a pretty interesting read; I'd like to see where the story goes. I like the bitchy Naruto chewing out his team mates, very fun.
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Reviewed By: The-Rogue-Otaku On: July 24, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. The whole Naruto been wearing a mask thing has been overdone, but the truth jutsu is a new and intresting twist that I really enjoyed.
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Reviewed By: Kyuubi-kun On: February 24, 2005 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this. It's something I've never seen before. I would like to see more of this ^_^ I hope you continue soon in order for that to happen. Hmm... I've been thinking on pairings in the past half an hour I spent reading this. I realized something... maybe Sasuke could come clean about how he truly feels for Naruto! After all... he can't lie! It's a perfect setup... okay, I'm a huge SasuNaru fan so you must excuse that obsession. Howveer, this story would still be good even without pairings. And if Naruto really did kill that lady... is that a good thing or a bad thing? And the glories of Kyuubi... I love him so much... heeeheeeheee! ^_^ Welp, I'm running out of space here so I'll end it with an adieu and a continue soon. Adieu! Continue Soon! *poofs out*
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 02:45 CST
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: February 08, 2005 20:29 CST
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Yee! YOu updated. Sorta. Sakura blubbering over Naruto was funny to me.. I'm not sure if you were trying to make it serious or not.. But I laughed anyway. Update soon!
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Title: not logged in...-.-
Reviewed By: twilight_aura On: January 29, 2005 11:48 CST
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hey!! you finally updated!!!i was atad bit confused in some spot but after i reread them a few times i finally understood them!!that was an chappy,naru-chan is so strong!but my sasuke-kun doesnt seem to be as strong as him :'(oh well!^^please update!!your story is so different from others and its unipuness is what makes me love it so much!!!^______^::gives u a cookie::^^
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Reviewed By: Marva On: January 28, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty cool! XD I've never read any other Naruto fic, and I've never seen any episodes, read any magna ect., but I bet this one is pretty origonal! ^_~ It is pretty good, and I like it lots! ^___^ XD Harsh language... XP But it's not a bad fic! XD Really good! I cant wait for that update! XD XD
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Title: ::gonk::
Reviewed By: Dancing_Kitsune On: January 28, 2005 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left a cliffie.... ::gonk:: ::sigh:: Well, theres susspence in that, I guess. ^ ^; Whoa.. Naruto is totally unpredictable.. You had him in perfect character!! And Sasuke comforting Sakura..? Im sorry, but that seemed a little out of place, even with the circumstances... And the angst all together.. Love it! Update soon, kudosai!!
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Reviewed By: karin On: January 26, 2005 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lov it write more write more PRETTY PLEZ
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Title: w00t w00t
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story kicks ass keep writen kk! update soon
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: January 24, 2005 21:13 CST
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OO OO Tenten! OO OO Temari! OO OO Anko :) I like that one especially. OO OO Shizune 00 00 The ramen bar girl, Ayame.
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: January 24, 2005 21:04 CST
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I gave you those numbers already. Too lazy to make more. OMG.. If I was just following this from the beginning, I would have gone insane with THAT cliffhanger! Ouchies!
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: January 24, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though the thought of Naruto hiding underneath a "mask" is getting really old, this was very enjoyable so far. I'm pretty sure you didn't make Naruto too strong, since he probably was exagerating since he was speaking about himself? How strong are these people to get the drop on Kakashi like that?
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Reviewed By: writerlover101 On: January 23, 2005 07:12 CST
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i love it!!! oh please update soon! XD naruto kicks ASS!!! XD
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Title: k
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 12:15 CST
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True about Hinata, she's accepted him when everyone else hasn't. Be nice to see a fic where her loyalty is repaid
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Title: k
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 12:15 CST
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True about Hinata, she's accepted him when everyone else hasn't. Be nice to see a fic where her loyalty is repaid
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Title: Katzztar
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a cold Naruto.............here's a pairing I've not seen...Temari. Tere are several advantages, family strength= Temari & KanKurao has stayed with the youngest brother, Gaara despite the demon in him. Naruto did say the last time he had a good fight was with Garra. With that family, he has a better chance of acceptance and has a worthy sparring partner.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 04:26 CST
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Interesting. What happens now? coolsa.
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Reviewed By: SchwarzeTraum On: October 12, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz plz PLZ uptate! i'm dying to know what happens! i love the fic, and NEED to know what happens! I think that a Naruto/Hinata pair for this fic would be nice. UPTATE!
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Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update this or I will slowly gouge out your eyeballs and then poke my eyeballs out with a blunt pencil....UPDATE! i love your story soooo MUCH!!!!
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Reviewed By: yo-yo boy On: September 07, 2004 21:26 CDT
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naruto/hinata definetly. please update.
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Reviewed By: chibi^^ On: August 09, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope u update soon um...how about a naruto/hinata
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Reviewed By: Wolfstein On: July 28, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its Konoha, and thats the only error I found in the entire fanfiction. I find this funny and good. Please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Firegirl531 On: July 04, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I like fics where Naruto drops his mask, but I think that you should have Sasuke talk a little bit more. Also the village is spelled Konoha or Konohagakure. I hope you continue soon!
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