| "Frightening Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Title: w00t w00t
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story kicks ass keep writen kk! update soon
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: January 24, 2005 21:13 CST
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OO OO Tenten! OO OO Temari! OO OO Anko :) I like that one especially. OO OO Shizune 00 00 The ramen bar girl, Ayame.
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: January 24, 2005 21:04 CST
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I gave you those numbers already. Too lazy to make more. OMG.. If I was just following this from the beginning, I would have gone insane with THAT cliffhanger! Ouchies!
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Reviewed By: blacky D On: January 24, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though the thought of Naruto hiding underneath a "mask" is getting really old, this was very enjoyable so far. I'm pretty sure you didn't make Naruto too strong, since he probably was exagerating since he was speaking about himself? How strong are these people to get the drop on Kakashi like that?
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Reviewed By: writerlover101 On: January 23, 2005 07:12 CST
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i love it!!! oh please update soon! XD naruto kicks ASS!!! XD
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Title: k
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 12:15 CST
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True about Hinata, she's accepted him when everyone else hasn't. Be nice to see a fic where her loyalty is repaid
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Title: k
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 12:15 CST
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True about Hinata, she's accepted him when everyone else hasn't. Be nice to see a fic where her loyalty is repaid
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Title: Katzztar
Reviewed By: Katzztar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a cold Naruto.............here's a pairing I've not seen...Temari. Tere are several advantages, family strength= Temari & KanKurao has stayed with the youngest brother, Gaara despite the demon in him. Naruto did say the last time he had a good fight was with Garra. With that family, he has a better chance of acceptance and has a worthy sparring partner.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 04:26 CST
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Interesting. What happens now? coolsa.
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Reviewed By: SchwarzeTraum On: October 12, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz plz PLZ uptate! i'm dying to know what happens! i love the fic, and NEED to know what happens! I think that a Naruto/Hinata pair for this fic would be nice. UPTATE!
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Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update this or I will slowly gouge out your eyeballs and then poke my eyeballs out with a blunt pencil....UPDATE! i love your story soooo MUCH!!!!
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Reviewed By: yo-yo boy On: September 07, 2004 21:26 CDT
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naruto/hinata definetly. please update.
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Reviewed By: chibi^^ On: August 09, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope u update soon um...how about a naruto/hinata
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Reviewed By: Wolfstein On: July 28, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its Konoha, and thats the only error I found in the entire fanfiction. I find this funny and good. Please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Firegirl531 On: July 04, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I like fics where Naruto drops his mask, but I think that you should have Sasuke talk a little bit more. Also the village is spelled Konoha or Konohagakure. I hope you continue soon!
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