| "The Donor" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Dana On: October 01, 2002 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. Not enough descriptions is why you got a low rating of style of writing. When I gave blood in high school I almost fainted twice. Felt terrible afterwards. |
Reviewed By: Dana On: October 01, 2002 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh hey Cynthia didn't know this was your fic. Man I miss the old boards. |
Reviewed By: Cynthia, Lady of Piedmon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
The idea overall is good, but it could've used more details and descriptions to make it more intense. |
