| "Midnight's Song" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: ChaoticAngelofElvenBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I've never seen the use of a succubus in a lemon. It gives me ideas. And how she seduced Hiei was very nice ;). Kairo an interesting name. I like it that you made her sound so elegant yet give beggar clothes. The contradiction is great. Well I hope you make something like this again. -Kalista
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Reviewed By: A Lone Howl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 10:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Lemon.
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