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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 10:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 20 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Title: Welcome Back!
Reviewed By: lambdalady07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 09:08 EST
Comment/Review:
Hello: I just wanted to tell you that I am glad that you are back after quite some time and that you put up another chapter for "Red and Black". I haven't read it yet but look forward to reading it and will send a review afterwards. Until then :o), Lambdalady07
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Title: Red & Black
Reviewed By: lambdalady07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 08:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I believe in the importance to writers to get constructive criticism and reviews and I dont write many, so here it is...I think that you have great writing talent when it comes to description of character and creativity of story/plot. Noir is one of my fav anime and overall this story is great, one of the best I have read. What deters from the content of the story is the redundancy and all of the circumlocution that it takes to get to the point you are attempting to make, throughout the story. It can be good to have a some suspense in what is to come next in the story, but the story can become monotonous and can lose the readers interest if the suspense is dwelled on for too long. I have encountered stories like this in the past that have lost my interest, so I would stop reading them. What has kept my interest with your story is the overall plot of the story, the intriguing characters, and of course the relationship development between Mirielle and Kirika. This story really has some bite to it, which I really like and havent seen much of in other stories I have read (which were more for kids :o)). So far I have only read up to ch. 13, but I will continue reading on, as the story is interesting. I hope that you take this as positive criticism that you can implement into your writing and I do hope to see more of it. Keep up the great work! Although I am only on ch. 13, I am hoping you will update soon, since its been a while, Thanks!
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Reviewed By: DarkFeenix On: September 11, 2005 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for a loooong time, always thinking I'll review at some point.. finally got the courage to do so >.>; Considering how many awards your fics have won, I don't think you need to be told how excellent author you are. I decided not to take the fanboyish 10/10/10/10/10 rating line, and actually give some feedback... Anyway, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and certainly best Noir one. You manage to keep the characters VERY realistic and IC. The way Mireille and Kirika behave and think is frighteningly close to the anime. Also, your world for the fic works well. Your "enemys" for Noir and their backgrounds seem relatively well thought out and they think and act like real people which is very good thing for ACC. You also manage to make the soldats seem more realistic and show their capabilities better than they were shown in the anime. There are only few things that annoy me, one being how slow things progress. Yeah, it's natural and I know you need to take it slow but I'm dying here reading this thing :S Another is, that at some points you start to over describe things, lenghtening the fic for nothing and making that part slower and more boring to read. Seriously though, I could probably give you 1000 word feedback per chapter, there is so much that I'd love to comment.. I'd just need to take notes for that :P Keep up the good work, I'll try to give better comments on next chap :)(sorry for bad Eng, me being Finn...) DarkFeenix@gmail. |
Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 10:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 19 it was great. Keep up the great. Work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 18 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 17 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 16 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 10:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 15 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 14 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 13 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 12:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 12 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 11 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 10 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 10:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 9 it was great.
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