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| "Summer Storm" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 11:21 CDT
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The characterization in this is really excellent and the plot was engaging. I'm especially fond of the Waya parts. Having him be the one to prod them because he wanted Hikaru out of his apartment was too funny.
| Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I really liked that story ^-^ Usualy I don't read unusualy long fics, but this one kinda grabbed me in the first paragraph (lines.... subject sectons... which ever you wish to call them ^^; ). It;s good when a story does that ^-^ That was so emotionaly attaching to the reader, way to draw people in! I was reading this during my short passings during school between one class and the next, and I could hardly put it down for more than five minutes once class began! (and the only reason that there is a 9 for over all-ness is because I believe that 10 sort of says that the writer does not need to get better.... but I think that every one needs to get better, so I really only give a nine there ^-^; )
| Reviewed By: melanie^_^ On: March 07, 2005 15:09 CST
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That was really nice, and you wrapped it up so well at the end (with the making up/raining analogy and all). And because I liked "The Right Moves" so much, too, I'm now going to take a look at your other fics ^_^
| Reviewed By: samurai-ashes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked this; I just recently got into Hikago, so this is the first fanfic of it I've read -- and quite the lovely piece at that! ^^v But I liked how there was this huge misunderstanding; i love misunderstandings, and you portrayed teh reasons and reactions and all that terrifically. Also, the back story fit in perfectly, and you wove it together with present almost-flawlessly (maybe that was a format issue? MM.org likes to rape format, it seems, lol) -- it really strengthed the present events. Great work!
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