| "Tension" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Roisu On: October 29, 2015 05:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Integra is English and Alucard is Romanian but lived in England for
100 years...why do they refer to each other with Japanese forms of
address?
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Sir-Integra-Hellsing On: September 05, 2007 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I really DID like it. Lol; I am hopelessly obsessed with the fanfictions, although I would be very happy if you continued and tell us how Integra responded to her pet's actions. That would be awesome. Please make more AxI fanfics
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Reviewed By: Chibi_Ne? On: April 17, 2007 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaa! I dont know how else to say this but..I truly loved it..I felt like I was in Integras place..Made me feel all tingly..I really liked how you ended the story too..and you really must ignore people like Lady Blackhat..I liked how you wrote it. Its always more fun to read a fanfiction where the characters are Ooc :]
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Title: SOMEBODYinTHEwardrobe
Reviewed By: SOMEBODYinTHEwardrobe On: March 18, 2006 12:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one shot simply beggs for continuation although it is better if it stays like this on one hand, on the other I would really like to know what happens to Integral, does she become a vampire or a ghoul or survive the "love bite" of her pet
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Title: LEMONLEMONLEMONLEMON!!!
Reviewed By: Artemis_Vampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 16:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
LEMOOOOOON!!! I love it!!! Hahahahahahahahahahaaaaaa!!! By the way...this was very IC...despite popular opinion. I think that under the right circumstances, even miss hellsing could be made to beg. No straight female in her right mind could say HELL NO to that. And probably some of the other team too...
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 19:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
I think it was really good! I don't care if they're OOC. I'm a hopeless romantic and I think Alucard is just as good as a lover as he is as a fighter.
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Reviewed By: Lady Blackhat On: June 06, 2004 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting idea, but it could use work on the grammar and spelling. Characters are too OOC as well. Alucard refers to Integra as "My Darling"? Nope, it would never happen. Integra Fairbrooke Wingates Hellsing "begs" Alucard to take her? Nope again, it would never happen.
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