| "The Promise" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: More, please, More!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 22:05 CDT
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I really like this story!! There are so many well developed twists and turns. Alex showing up at the end was pretty obvious but I anxious about it anyway! Please update again soon and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what a cliffy to leave us at on Chapter 6. Now that was just aaahhh! I knew something like this was going to happen. I just want Hitomi and Van to work things out. They have to!!! Ok I am waiting for the next chapter and trying to be paiteint. Please updadte. Great story. I really love it.
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Title: but... but... but...
Reviewed By: c_vega [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered your fic, and I love it. I do hope you can update soon, but no pressure. I understand how easy it can be to get distracted and pulled away. Your writing has be completely pulled in. Descriptions are enthralling to the point that you end up perched on the edge of your seat just to read the next line. I eagerly await more from your creative mind. But I am a bit miffed at you for that cliffhanger. That was just mean. ;-) I almost fell off my chair I was so close to the edge. That would have really hurt! lol Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Iwakura1138 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wahoooooo! another chapter ^_^ very good chapter, i'm so glad to finally know what happened after the diner ;P gah! cliffhanger, though! *chants* more, more, more!
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Title: Ooops
Reviewed By: Kissy_Moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 06:33 CDT
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Oops forgot to actually review!! Ha ha sorry! You keep up the good work babe. And hurry and crank out another chapter for me to edit!! See ya later!! Kissy_Moonlight
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Title: Bwahahahaha!!!!
Reviewed By: Kissy_Moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 06:29 CDT
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Hmmmmmm I am bored again....Dun-dun-dun *spookie music plays in background as feindish editor enters stage left. Holding a cape she is wearing up over her face like in old vampire movies!* "I vont to give a review! Blah....or in the name of the Viper 'I vant to vipe you vindows!' *Shrill scream is heard from somewhere in the crowd watching the drama take place* ..................Hmmmmm ya know it is pretty bad when it gets harder for me to put up a new chapter of my crossover, yet I have this much free time to make up this incredibly stupid little "play" ...thing! *Clears throat* Uh...I'm done!! ~_~ zzz
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Title: *begs*
Reviewed By: Iwakura1138 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 20:16 CDT
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CvR pleeaaaaasssseeeee update soon!!!! pretty please? please? the promise is the best esca fanfic so you have to keep going!!
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow... this is a fabulous fic... I hope you will update soon!!
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Title: best esca fanfic!
Reviewed By: Iwakura1138 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorite escaflowne fanfic. i think the author does a great job of making hitomi and van believable. the characters seem just as they do in the series, but older, of course. i really love this one and hope its updated soon! p.s. the only reason i give a rating of 9 on spelling and grammar is because i notice you've mixed up "where" and "were" (i.e. "where" is only used if you are talking about a place, like "where is it?" otherwise it should be "were").
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