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Reviewed By: TeardropCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god, I just love this fic. It makes my heart race! Seeing the last time it was updated makes any further updates seem unlikely. But if you ever do continue this story, I'll be right there hanging on your every word.
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Title: Chapters 1-9
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic so far and I hope you come back and continue it! ^^ After all, you did say in this latest chapter that there was a finished "other half" of nine. You also have many things set in motion that would allow you to continue the plot, especially the whole remaining scene on Gaia. They're not married yet and they haven't even left Earth! There are still many trials that await them ahead and their love is still new. They need to catch up on what's happenned the last 5 years, there's just so much! I absolutely love the Van/Hitomi interactiona nd how possessivley Van acts and how he shows his emotions. I like everything about how you've written him as well as Hitomi and I hope that doesn't change in your future chapters. If you need any help at all just send me an e-mail, I'd be glad to help. The only thing I could suggest to make your story better is to add more spacing in your later chapters. In your earlier chapters everything was spaced properly in between paragraphs and during conversations but in chapters 8 and 9 everything seems very blocky. I'm sure it was because you were just in a rush to get them posted since it had been awhile since you had updated, hehe. Other than that I could not find anything else that needed improvement. Your level of detail is good but it couldn't hurt to add more. ;) I truly hope you continue and I await your next chapter in the future! ^^
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Title: HIZY *waves*
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well i found out chibi Allen in a jar DOSE infact have raybies -_-'' hehe anyway YAY full update ^_^ cant wait till you update again toodles *skips off*
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE CONTINE ITS GREAT I WANNA NO WHAT HAPPENS SO PLEASE UPDATE A.S.A.P PRETTY PLEASE
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Title: ch. 8 review
Reviewed By: Iwakura1138 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O yes, editor keep on cvr about this fic, please! it\'s fantastic and we, the readers, are starved between updates. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bagel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you keep writing into this story because I am really enjoying it and think that you're a great writer! I can't stop reading this and can't wait till you write more.
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Title: The Promise
Reviewed By: Kissy_Moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Way to go babe ya did it!! Now we just gotta get ya workin on the next one before your readers linch you!!HEHE I am always here to torment hehehe!! Anyway the Chapter was really good keep up the good work!! Your Editor Kissy_Moonlight
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Title: T_T
Reviewed By: akai chou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this story! Please update it soon, I want to read more. T_T
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Title: T_T
Reviewed By: Tiffany [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story so much!!!! Please update it soon! T_T I want to read more!!
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Reviewed By: kissy_moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very...interesting. If I do say so myself. *sigh* I can't think of anythig witty so I will just say *pats CvR on the back* Good Job Bubble-headed Bubble-butt. This editor may not always be their for her feindish writer! (Cause she is emotionally abusive) By the way Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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Title: cliffhanger
Reviewed By: jennifer_luvs_fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!! i love it soo much...it has to be in one of my top 5 fanfics ever! Hitome is making me upset because of the way she is treating Van and it makes me read it more!!! i luvs it! I cried in the second last chapter....i think it was 6.....i felt so bad for Van! And i like the fact the merle has that cute cat guy after her lol.......but i really hope Van and Hitome Hit it off! ---------Jen
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Reviewed By: iwakura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter. the two new characters seemed pretty good, i enjoyed them. as always, my favorites are van and hitomi. i was originally pretty neutral on alex, as he was someone just hitomi settled for, but now he is really getting on my nerves. although, i'm sure that is probably your intention ~_^ i love how you convey so much substance w/ the eye contact between van and hitomi. i'm sure i've said it a million times, but this is such a great story. you've really got the characters down pat. can't wait for the update and keep up the good work CvR!
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Title: *sniffles*
Reviewed By: Iwakura1138 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
time for another update, yes? *bats eyelashes* please please?
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Title: Inda
Reviewed By: Inda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Here you are!!!!! I love this story. Please continue Can't wait. Why do they always hesitate in telling each other how they feel. Dam now Alex shows up. Oh No!@!!!! They should of haved sex when they kiss at the apartment. Don't make them hate. They need to be together.
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Title: Enjoyable as always
Reviewed By: GilShalos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 06:46 CDT
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I love it, having Alex at the parents house is just too classic and it\'s nice to see Merle with a romantic interest. As you can tell, I\'m really enjoying the continuation of the story. It makes following your story from FF.net worthwhile. Keep up the great work. It\'s nice to read a great story where the characters feel the same as they did in the series (differences for age/maturity should be expected five years later.) You have very few grammar issues in your fic, if you want what little I\'ve seen, just E-mail me. GilShalos is my profile name on both Mediaminer and FF.net. I look forward to the next installment.
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