| "Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Jyurian Itsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. This was beyond amazing! I loved your characterization, and the "love scenes" were incredibly touching and lovely. You did a terrific job on this.
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Title: Ting
Reviewed By: Ting [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 10:30 CDT
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This is a well written story, I think I read it on Fanfiction.net twice, but the story was removed because of the rating?... I also remembered you post it twice there, compare to some of the M/R rated stories post in FF.net, I don't understand why thry removed yours though. But I think this is a very nice story, glade you are still posting this somewhere !! I guess I am looking forward to read your other stories, as long as it's R/A Are you posting your stories anywhere else? or this is the only place?
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Reviewed By: Petri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good read. Very well done. Nice job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: aurora17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:24 CDT
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wow. this story has left me speechless. but i can still write. people like you are the reason i am almost willing to give up writing. cuz there is no way to compete with something so incredibly awesome.
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Title: THe Best Story Ever!
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooo good! I, this is the first Ranma 1/2 fic i've read, its soo good, that i know the others wont even compare! This was such a sweet story, i'll be sure to read more of your stories! Especailly the Inu Yasha one cause thats my favorite anime! I cant wait to see all the stories you've written, i would think someone was crazy if they had something bad to say about it... out of all the stories i've read, this one definatly should be rated with tens all the way across! P.S. sorry if i spelled something wrong...im not the best of spellers, lol! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm... I so loved this story!!! I was giggling non stop like a girly school child. Well please keep up the good work And I hope to read more of your stories!!! :) Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Rizu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 20:59 CDT
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LEEMMOONNAAADDDEE!! Sweet, sweet lemonade!!!! That's what I call unsmutty stories. I loved it so much!!! One question: Why did you keep spelling the word "were" as "where"? ^^;;; Just curious. You possibly used spellcheck and that messed it up. I absolutely loved it, it was so good!!! You must write more!!! *glomps* EEEE Now I'm going to harass my boyfriend and tell him to be more romantic and cute-like just like Ranma was with Akane!!! ^^!!!!
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Title: LOVED IT!
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 11:35 CDT
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There are many different types of lemon, btw. Waffy Lemon, which technically this is.. Sour lemon, which IS smut, ect. there's a time for everything, and sometimes the reader or writer is in the mood for waff, sometimes smut. Regardless, this is VERY GOOD! ^_^ Been so long since I wrote a waffy lemon, and after this.. i just might. lol.. **Singing** I'm in the mood for LOOOOOVVVEEEE...... ~Caliko
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Title: forever
Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very beutifull story i look forward to reading your other works in the future, i would be interesting to see/read the aftermath of this in an epilog.
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Title: Forever
Reviewed By: Kissy_Moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Teehee I reviewed it again even though the first one you still have!! Don't you feel special. Too bad you didn't include P-chan in this one!!! He would be like @..@ Bleeding nose and all!! LOL Sorry i am really bored and you wouldn't talk to me you loser. *sniff* your feindish editor feels sorely abused *sniff sniff* LOL sorry am really really bored!!! Ummmmmm....bye! Kissy_Moonlight
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Reviewed By: VScorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 18:34 CDT
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Sorry! Kinda messed up there! Appologies on the double post, blasted IE messed up. Seriouly though was a a great work, will try and have a look at your other one. Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 18:33 CDT
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That was beautiful. Plain and simple. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 18:31 CDT
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That was beautiful. Plain and simple. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: That was the best!
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (MM Member) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was the best lemon ever! And I\\\'m not just saying this, I seriously mean, that was the best god damn lemon I\\\'ve ever read! That was so good! Keep writing, I love your work! ~DBZ Lover~
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