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| "Advent Of The Goddess: The Origins Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lord Aaron [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont see what your worried about Shasta-Chan, you're a pretty good writer, though you might need to go over a few word spellings. All in all, its a good story... (Note[spoiler]: Earlier, you had Goku say that he could bring back Washu's child, um, Dragonballs anyone?)
| Reviewed By: Dumas1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The word is spelled Technology, not techknowlogy. Same with mercenary vs merchinary (you aren't Italian by any chance, are you?). Worship spell-check. Other than that, this is a great story...I generally don't like crossovers all that much, but this one is very interesting. Everyone seems to be in character unless my memory is failing. I'll have more to say once the plot starts moving.
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