Reviewed By: Pazzy On: May 13, 2004 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, it's good, but I was a little confused on something...Murkiu? I always thought that it was spelled Miroku, unless it's the japanese version. Or maybe you were typing really fast and didn't notice it. I noticed it when Sango said "Let go Murkiu, I'm going to kill Kikyo." There's a few mistakes in spelling and grammer, but not too many. Sesshomaru also sounds just a teeny bit ooc, but I guess that's cool to make the story flow, right? Anyhow, I just wanted to review, and so far it's not bad. I like it. I really hope you can continue it. Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......
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