| "Hiei Falls in Love??" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
U{DATE ONEGAI~!!
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: Lynzu_Seosima [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! i havnt been on mediaminer in a long time and you just refreshed my need to stay and read more awsome stories by people like you!!! i really hope you continue this storie iv allready added to my favorites. =^.^=
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Zircrubyon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was cool.better than mine and most beginners.overall nice job.^_~...hehe...cant wait till the next chapter.
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Title: Princess Fiona*snicker*
Reviewed By: shrimpo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story much better than the previous one I just sampled. It was so bad! The grammar, I mean. You have a nice vocabulary, thank goodness. Anyhow, I would appreciate it immensley if you were to continue on with this Fanfiction. Thank you, Fiona H.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
i agree with Reikka_Shinen but other wise it's really good update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I can tell it was your first fic. You should add more details to the story. Your character's personality completely changes. She starts out really quite but then at Koenma's office she seems happy, and she laughs. well... just work on it. Kay?
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