| "A Scrap of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: D On: August 19, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE can we have another chapter the wait is driving me crAZY!!!!! I just gotta know what happens next!! (now on knees begging--with big puppy dog eyes)
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Title: Ah, hehe...
Reviewed By: the Prince's Jewel On: July 10, 2005 14:52 CDT
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Yes, I know, the next chapter is not out yet. It went to my co-writer for some revising on the fight scene we had originally because we decided it seemed a tad mite off. *looks thoughtful* I think I might have the original "it could not possibly have happened like that" section hanging around...
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Reviewed By: bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your story. But it's not done yet *hint hint* can't wait for the next chapter. please write it soon! i hope Kakarrot kicks Napa's skaly ass! he deserves to die w/ what he did to Vegita! so, next chapter is expected in about... *looks at clock* ...now.
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: Plyric - not signed in On: March 07, 2005 03:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! The butterflies in my stomach are overcrowding!!! OMG, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: elenek *not logged in* On: February 09, 2005 16:09 CST
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hn. No updates in so long. The story is good although, somethings off. Vegeta is a prince and the strongest. Combatants should be competeing for the privilage to be taken as a mate by him, not the other way around. That could very easily be the origional purpose of the ritual but the King is choosing to warp it. Just something to think about should you ever choose to update. -El-
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Reviewed By: d On: August 16, 2004 14:27 CDT
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Awwww c'mon already I'm dying to know does he fight? does he win? are they happy ever after...........the suspence is really killing me.
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Finally Vegeta tells Goku why he needs him to be so strong. Deep in Goku's personality is the protector, now that he has a reason he should be able to do. I don't blame Vegeta not wanting to suffer the fate of drugged and Ki bound.
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Reviewed By: d On: July 12, 2004 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update soon I cant' wait to see what developes between Vegeta and Kakarott, and wether he can help his prince or not!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anatra DeSylvianno On: June 23, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent stuffs! I'm really enjoying the whole 'keeping Vegeta's plan a secret' thing. Poor Kakarot...he's going to be so confused, but it is delightful to see him so eager to please his prince no matter what. I do hope he figures out his whole 'ki control' problem though...that explosion in the training room was impressive, but not all that helpful. It just showed what potential he had, which, I suppose was good enough for Vegeta. Can't wait for more of this excellent story! :D ~Anatra
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 22:56 CDT
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It was so happy to see the update for this chapter. I find myself impatient for the reveal of Vegeta's exact problem, if Kakarott can help and just the sweet simple pleasures of watching Vegeta take care of Kakarott. Thanks for the update. I look forward to more soon.
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