Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gah! Sadness! Well, uhm...I have a few things to say: I think some of your grammar was off...the first chapter had "their" instead of "they're". But that's okay, since you knew that already, right? *wink wink*. Oh, yes! And how come you never told me about this story?! This was so good! I should lock you up with Inuyasha in a windowless cell when he's pissed off. Uhm, so yeah. Call me so we can get together soon! *just so all you unsuspecting people know, yes, I know The Frailness personally* Alrighty then, have an a-some summer! Jo
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