| "Offline Dates" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Title: Death by...Reviewification. Or not.
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Laughs uncontrollably* his... new... development. *Rolls on the floor* OMG!, You're awesome! The stuff you come up with is always so funny. Keep it up. Now I wanna know, the restaurant? was it WacDonalds? Carbys? Schmarveys? Jim Nortons?...wait, they don't have fries...probably Bendy's then. I never got arround to seeing Shrek 2 *cringes at retribution* I'll have to wait for the DVD I guees. That's ok. Hmm....is there potentialy for a second Date I wonder? maybe one where he manages to keep it in his pants hmm. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ i like the endof the 4th chappie it was funny keep going and ur welcum 4 the b-day wish ^_^
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Title: Hey...Shippo's hot, I'm sorry
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm getting really excited for when they finally meet. I wonder...McDonlads perhaps, for some sticks (LOL). Anyways, I have to say that Shippo doesn't sound half bad. But don't worry, I'm still as crazy over Kouga as ever. Did you get a reply from the other author re: the Hanyou? I havn't got a chance to talk to you about that at school. Maybe I'll do that tomorrow. As always, I loved it Aeryn. You're such a creative and original person with an amazing writing talent, it makes me green with envy. I'll get over it, eventually. Exams are coming up soon, so I need to get back to studying, but you asked me to read it and I did! *thinks to herself* mmm...Kouga *snaps back to reality* sorry. *laughs* Keep writing!! I'll be reading and reviewing!! -Ayame (p.s. watch out for episode 83 and 84!! [that's where I come in] we'll probably not get to see it for like 3 years...lol *shakes her fist at the translation lag and the lack of available DVDs* Damn you!)
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Reviewed By: gaia-esque [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Definitely like the story.. very cool. Hope to read more from you soon! Oh and love the "Wac Donalds" :)
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Title: *laughs*...*rolls on floor Laughing*
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was an 11 that's what you'd be getting...I love how you described their eyes. WacDonalds sounds like a fun date. Thay getting some "sticks"? *laughs again* I love all of your stuff Aeryn, but this is one of my fav's. P.s. | [4/\/ 5p34|< L337 /\/0\/\/!!!! *smiles broadly*
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol! Write more soon, please!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok #1 HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY! and #2 update please
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like it. :-P I wish that chapters were longer though. As it progresses they should probably be longer. I hope you have this all set out, it should be good :)
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashsfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing damn it gotta hear what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this stiry I add it to my favs!!! I love reading Inuyasha fan fics. Because I understand them!! Yu-Gi-Oh ones have alot of gay things. I ihate that. Oh well keep up the goood work. I wnat to read more!!!!
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Title: Satisfied
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happier now! but still sad about The Hanyou who loved me...*shakes her fist* I'll get over it. But in the meentime, I'll read all of your other stories. I'm really like'n this one, very original and creative (that could mean the same thing eh...lol). Love your stuff Aeyrn!!!keep it up!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute, but ouch that must hurt slamming your head on the door. i fell off the stairs once but it didnt hurt that much. update soon.
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Title: AIYA!
Reviewed By: Kagome_The_Little_Ally_Of_Justice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10!!! W00t and the woohoo!! Can't wait for more of this and THWLM!! Ahh, my Hotafuffy Hanyou! *Huggles the Hotafuffy Inu!* I Lurfels the story so far!! Luve you, Aeryn!! Bai bai!!
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Title: shock...at the lack of elaboration
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the only one who reviews properly? I mean Kagome and you do it good too, but come on...all I ses is "it's good" or "I liked it"...I'm a bit shocked at the lack of creative reviewage. oh well, I'll just plod along in my own little expansie review world. lol. P.S., thanks for the clarification with the handles, it was easier to read this time, but still very cool!!! *smiles*
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