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Reviewed By: gaia-esque [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Definitely like the story.. very cool. Hope to read more from you soon! Oh and love the "Wac Donalds" :)
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Title: *laughs*...*rolls on floor Laughing*
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was an 11 that's what you'd be getting...I love how you described their eyes. WacDonalds sounds like a fun date. Thay getting some "sticks"? *laughs again* I love all of your stuff Aeryn, but this is one of my fav's. P.s. | [4/\/ 5p34|< L337 /\/0\/\/!!!! *smiles broadly*
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol! Write more soon, please!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok #1 HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY! and #2 update please
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like it. :-P I wish that chapters were longer though. As it progresses they should probably be longer. I hope you have this all set out, it should be good :)
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashsfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing damn it gotta hear what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this stiry I add it to my favs!!! I love reading Inuyasha fan fics. Because I understand them!! Yu-Gi-Oh ones have alot of gay things. I ihate that. Oh well keep up the goood work. I wnat to read more!!!!
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Title: Satisfied
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happier now! but still sad about The Hanyou who loved me...*shakes her fist* I'll get over it. But in the meentime, I'll read all of your other stories. I'm really like'n this one, very original and creative (that could mean the same thing eh...lol). Love your stuff Aeyrn!!!keep it up!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: lunar_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute, but ouch that must hurt slamming your head on the door. i fell off the stairs once but it didnt hurt that much. update soon.
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Title: AIYA!
Reviewed By: Kagome_The_Little_Ally_Of_Justice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10 out of 10!!! W00t and the woohoo!! Can't wait for more of this and THWLM!! Ahh, my Hotafuffy Hanyou! *Huggles the Hotafuffy Inu!* I Lurfels the story so far!! Luve you, Aeryn!! Bai bai!!
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Title: shock...at the lack of elaboration
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the only one who reviews properly? I mean Kagome and you do it good too, but come on...all I ses is "it's good" or "I liked it"...I'm a bit shocked at the lack of creative reviewage. oh well, I'll just plod along in my own little expansie review world. lol. P.S., thanks for the clarification with the handles, it was easier to read this time, but still very cool!!! *smiles*
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Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stuff Aeryn!!! You rock. This is a spin I was thinking of going on for my fic, but decided on keeping it a "story" typr deal...I was a bit confused though, b/c some of the statements don't have a name handle attached...inda hard to know who's talkin' don't cha think?, anyways, keep it up! (I'll be checking back for more updates...)(and on the Hanyou one too!!!)*huggles Kouga* you will be mine!!!
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Reviewed By: Ravenette [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have agood start here...something interesting...I would enjoy reading more If you do continue! :)
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far, but it's a little hard to read the chattings. Maybe you'll continue? ^^
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