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Title: *Wanders Aimlessly*
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Screw Grammer!)...umm, on a side note, It was good, enjoyed the Kagome/Kikyo confrontation, but I think you may have been too harsh on Kouga...that's all I'm saying on that matter. *laughles Manically...even more-so then usual..* I totally got recognition! In your face lemon merangue pie! in YOUR face!...[please note, I am a fane of the pie with lemons and merangue, but right now we are at odds...a whole pie in the span of an hour will mess you right up...I'll leave the rest to the imgination]. *side note!!!* DMFA ROCKS BOTH YOUR AND MY SOCKS!!...if I was a kangaroo rat and Seth wasn't married...;). Either that or Dan, but I'd have to be a catgirl of some sort now wouldn't I. But it wouldn't be that bad, being a catgirl I mean. I'll stick with Kouga.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans.
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Title: *laughs at the hysterics and what not*
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again, you amaze, but that's not a really hard task...*lowers her head at her simplicity*. Anyways, I enjoyed it throughly, especially when Kagome kicks Kikyo's ass! *happy dance ensues*. Lol, I re-read my review from last time, and I ended it with "Keep it up!"...It didn't occur to me at the time what that statement could have implicated, but upon reflection...well, you do the math.
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Reviewed By: Kagome_The_Little_Ally_Of_Justice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:22 CDT
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Forgot one thing... I CAN ACCESS UR FICS NOW!!! *DIEZ W00T-ING!!~* TTFN and TTYL!! See you @ the Yu-Gi-Oh! Movie!!!
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Title: AIYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kagome_The_Little_Ally_Of_Justice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:20 CDT
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OMG!!! W00T W00T!!!!! AIYAAAAAAA!!!! AERYN!!! ME LOVE-Y THE FIC!!! MOO FAH FAH!!! *Giggles excitifatedly!!* DIE EVIL KIKYO!!! *Isht SO hyper!!* I-sa listening to Simple Plan!! ^-^ *Currently, "You Don't Mean Anything"!! GOOD SONG!!* w00t! Luve you, Sango! Your Luver, Kagome!!
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Title: wow just wow i think that word sums up this fic!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmm........ that was funny bout his ear's and gettin a boner from just her touching them he he he he he happy belated-b-day!!! ^_^ keep up the good work!! ^_^ update update update update asap please?
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Title: Death by...Reviewification. Or not.
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Laughs uncontrollably* his... new... development. *Rolls on the floor* OMG!, You're awesome! The stuff you come up with is always so funny. Keep it up. Now I wanna know, the restaurant? was it WacDonalds? Carbys? Schmarveys? Jim Nortons?...wait, they don't have fries...probably Bendy's then. I never got arround to seeing Shrek 2 *cringes at retribution* I'll have to wait for the DVD I guees. That's ok. Hmm....is there potentialy for a second Date I wonder? maybe one where he manages to keep it in his pants hmm. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ i like the endof the 4th chappie it was funny keep going and ur welcum 4 the b-day wish ^_^
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Title: Hey...Shippo's hot, I'm sorry
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm getting really excited for when they finally meet. I wonder...McDonlads perhaps, for some sticks (LOL). Anyways, I have to say that Shippo doesn't sound half bad. But don't worry, I'm still as crazy over Kouga as ever. Did you get a reply from the other author re: the Hanyou? I havn't got a chance to talk to you about that at school. Maybe I'll do that tomorrow. As always, I loved it Aeryn. You're such a creative and original person with an amazing writing talent, it makes me green with envy. I'll get over it, eventually. Exams are coming up soon, so I need to get back to studying, but you asked me to read it and I did! *thinks to herself* mmm...Kouga *snaps back to reality* sorry. *laughs* Keep writing!! I'll be reading and reviewing!! -Ayame (p.s. watch out for episode 83 and 84!! [that's where I come in] we'll probably not get to see it for like 3 years...lol *shakes her fist at the translation lag and the lack of available DVDs* Damn you!)
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Reviewed By: gaia-esque [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Definitely like the story.. very cool. Hope to read more from you soon! Oh and love the "Wac Donalds" :)
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Title: *laughs*...*rolls on floor Laughing*
Reviewed By: Wolf_Demon_Ayame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was an 11 that's what you'd be getting...I love how you described their eyes. WacDonalds sounds like a fun date. Thay getting some "sticks"? *laughs again* I love all of your stuff Aeryn, but this is one of my fav's. P.s. | [4/\/ 5p34|< L337 /\/0\/\/!!!! *smiles broadly*
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol! Write more soon, please!!
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok #1 HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY! and #2 update please
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like it. :-P I wish that chapters were longer though. As it progresses they should probably be longer. I hope you have this all set out, it should be good :)
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Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashsfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing damn it gotta hear what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!
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