| "Loves a Mystery w/the YuGiOh Cast" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: read my other fanfic!!!
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
It may not be as interesting or good, but i want to know if you like it so i'll know to delete it or let it be. So give me some FEEDBACK!! thanx...if ya please R+R on the story of "Immortal Beings of the Night" i would appreaciate it! ~Tamra
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Nice job on the chapter! I wish I could write like that ^^;; oh yeah about the ending parts... well I like them... it kind of makes me feel better... but hey it's your choice... besides Maura does have to see his boyfriend ^_~ anyways I'll read your other story... how did I know you ask? Well I made you my favorite author ^^;; well update soon!
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Title: Me AGAIN!
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 18:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey....i am sorry Yamifanner, but hear me out: I can't put u in every chappie, cuz the guideline of my story dosen't really have u in it..Please don't hurt me...!!! or reframe from throwing things at me! ~Tamra
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Title: AWESOME!!!
Reviewed By: Kasemeithesilverfox/dogyouko On: June 11, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! I'm REviewing I'm reviewing! On with the other chapters!
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Title: ok...
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Ok well I hope you have fun on your vacation! Till then I'll be with Yugi ^_~
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
When am I going to appear in your chapters? I want to be with the gang especially Yami. Please put me in all of your chapters. By the way, the party was fun. We should plan one in your next chapter.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: *sighs* You always leave me wanted to find out more! You got to update! ^^; Anyways yay party! *goes and dances with Yugi (Yeah I love him... and a little upset that he likes Tea! *sighs* so not fair...)* Maura: Well we better go... I hope you update soon! *goes back to dancing with Mokuba*
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Very nice chapter... you keep making me say update! ^^;; I wish my fic got more reviews... anyways *giggles* I knew they would kiss! Hmm... maybe I should tell Seto *smirks* I wonder what he's going to say? Oh well... yes Maura is still with Mokuba... ^^;; I guess they really do love each other. Oh well I better go... see ya and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Kage On: June 10, 2004 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Aw you ended at the best part... well I loved it. Are we having a party for Mokie and Maura or something? ^^; Well anyways I can't wait to spy on Maura and Mokuba kissing...or making out...^^; well right now Maura is out with Mokuba on their first date! Yay! Oh I better go... *puts spy outfit on* Got to spy on them... see ya!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Wow... That chapter was really good and I was so worried when that guy shot... well you know... Still it was very good... Maura: Yeah it is really good... Jasmine: Oh Maura did Mokuba kiss you? Maura: *blushes* Well... no. Jasmine: Well cause in your past you did kiss him and you even got to make out with him back then. Maybe that will happen again ^_~ Maura: *blushes* You, the author and Seto are going to spy on us I'm guessing... Jasmine: Well maybe... well I better go *whispers* lets see if Mokie and Maura do kiss or make out! Maura: What did you say? Jasmine: Oh nothing... update soon! ^^
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Title: Good Fic
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Put me in all of your chapters. I want to be with Yami so bad. Me and him make a good couple.
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: I loved it and I hope to find out what happends next! Oh Maura what did you tell Mokuba? Maura: I... I... said that I... love him... Jasmine: O.O But you just met!!! Maura: I know, but something inside me tells me that I loved him before... but I remember that Hera hated my being with Mokuba... she would beat me... I don't want to get rekilled... Jasmine: Don't worry you'll be ok... well I better go... hope you update soon!
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jasmine: ^^ Yeah I think you should change the title... it fits in with the story so that title works. *frees Maura from that belt* You ok? Maura: I think so... I could not breath in that thing... Jasmine: At least Hera won't bother us... at least for now... Oh well hope you update soon... so that way Mokuba can see Maura *winks at Maura* Maura: *blushes* Jasmine: ^_~ See ya!
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Title: yellow!! me again...
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
WELL SHOULD I CHANGE THE TITLE OR NOT?! I just really need to know...and don't worry Maura i'll save you, Jasmine too! Tamra: *appears out of nowhere in front of Hera* You know for doing this to my reviewers/friends you are gonna pay! *kicks her in the head and she falls to the ground unconscious* One down and no more to go!!! *Frees Maura and Jasmine then disappears from sight*
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