| "Loves a Mystery w/the YuGiOh Cast" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: Hera: Ok...
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Hera: Hello again... and yes I still got Jasmine and Maura in my control... anyways that title sounds good for this story... Although I'm not into romance, but oh well ^^ Jasmine: *chained up* Help she's crazy!!!! Hera: *pans Jasmine (well me...) again* ^^ much better don't you think? Jasmine: x_x Maura: Let us go! I want to see Mokuba! Hera: Not in your life! *tightens the belt with her Magic* Maura: Can't... breath... help...*faints* Hera: ^^ oh well who cares about them... hmm maybe *looks at Maura* I'll kill the young one... oh well update soon or else Maura is dead. Jasmine: *wakes up* NOOOOO!!!! Hera: *sighs* I'll kill her later... oh well better go ^^ see you soon! Oh and tell Mokuba that princess Maura will die very soon ^-^ Jasmine: I hate you Hera... well hope you decide on the title I just hope I can save us all... see ya...
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Title: That was a good chap.
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 17:34 CDT
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*imagines Kaiba wearing that outfit* *dies* That was good. Yes. I would change the title. It would sound better. *hugs* You need to keep writing. 'Tis good. And, Maura, I'll get the letter to Mokuba for you if Tamra can't! I have my ways...*evil smile*
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Title: Yamifanner
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yamifanner: i will be putting you in my story, but only for a brief moment....i am sorry, but at least you are in the fanfic. I am also sorry to say, but i won't be putting a nineth millennium item in my story....i really don't want you to be mad at me...it's just that, i really had something else planned and adding something i didn't intend on putting in my fanfic, kind of srews up the guideline. Please don't be mad at me. ~Tamra
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Reviewed By: Poizenthornz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. That last chapter is cute. Actually all of them are so far nice. Keep it up.
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Title: maybe
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll try to put you in the fic: yamifanner...but there's (as i said) no guarentee..cuz i am trying to follow a guide line that i already (not) set out...but i'll try...you know me..trying to do whats best for my readers...*sweat drops* ~Tamra
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Title: Bored... *gets hit on the head* @_@
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hera: Hello there... Jasmine: *knocked out* x_x Hera: Well this fic seems to be very good... now then where is Maura? Maura: *comes in* huh? Who are you? Hera: I have a gift for you... *puts a silk belt on Maura* Maura: It's beautiful... but it's kind of big... Hera: *smirks and makes it too tight* Maura: Too tight... can't breath... *faints* Hera: *makes a really tight bow* ^^ my job is done... now update soon please. Jasmine: Ow... what's going on? Hera: *pans Jasmine head again* Jasmine: x_x Hera: ^^ update soon!
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Title: More Romance
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, put me in your next chapter. My millennium item is the Millennium Charmbracelet.
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL...i'll try to give it to him...but there is not gaurentee..K?k! OK and thank ya'll for ya reviews...please R&R!!! I am almost to 1000 visits...and with you i get make my goal come true!!! Please R&R!!!! ~Tamra
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: ^^ Such a good chapter... Maura: *blushes like crazy* he thinks I look hot... Jasmine: ^^;; I know and he has not even seen you yet... well in the past he did... anyways yes Maura was a princess, but here's the part that Mokuba is going to get mad... you see Maura back then had a very evil stepmother named Hera... and well lets just say that she sent someone to kill Maura because she loved Mokuba in the past... sad but true... Maura: Yeah... Jasmine: ^^;; but my story talks about the whole thing... well anyways nice chapter! And hope you update soon! Maura: Oh... *gives the author a note* Can you give this to Mokuba for me? Jasmine: Oh! Let me see... *grabs note* Dear Mokuba, I was wondering if we could meet each other if your brother does not mind... anyways I well... want to tell you something, but I need to talk to you alone... Love Maura. Maura: *blushes* Jasmine: *smirks* This should be fun... well got to go! See ya!!!
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Title: Having A Blast
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good job on the story. I relly love Yami. *Imagines Yami w/o a shirt* Damn, he is sexy. Whoa, he is HOT!!!! Can I be in your fic and fall in love with Yami?
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Title: Hi hi
Reviewed By: Icey-chan (it's Moonlight_Icey speaking/typing here)) On: May 29, 2004 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOP WOOP WOOP WOOP WOOP WOOP!!!! *running around in circles on the floor like Homer Simpson did in some episode* Tee hee, that was a great chapter!!! Soz for not reviewing lately, i'm a very BUSY girl!!! *wink wink* lol, na jk's. Anywho, keep writing, that was a great chappie!!
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Title: Yay! ^^
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 17:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Araka: This is sooo good! Continue, please. *hugs* Don't worry Maura. He'll like you. ^^ He sounded so excited. ^^ Yama: *is thinking of Seto without a shirt* *hearts* *drool* Araka: She said it was good! YAY! ^^
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Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maura: *blushing like crazy* Jasmine: Ok I'll give you some info about her... she's the same age as Mokuba, an inch shorter than Mokuba, long black hair with pink highlights and green eyes. As you can tell she's shy, but she's nice... Well she does have a past life which she was a princess, but if you want to know more about that you'll have to read my story ^^; Maura: I don't think he will like me though... Jasmine: Oh Maura stop worrying... anyways great job with the chapter! Update soon!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Jasmine and her gang [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jasmine: Nice chapter! Maura: She's going to tell him! *blushes* But what happens if he does not like me? Jasmine: Oh Maura I'm sure that he likes you... Take me for example... I love Yugi... we have so much in common that it scares me ^^;; and on quizes I always end up being Yugi or I end up with an 'You are going to marry Yugi!' and we are the same height! Maura: Um... the point? Jasmine: Oh ^^;; well my point is that you have a lot in common with him too... you're just too shy to show it... Maura: Just like you huh? Jasmine: *tries to not blush* well anyways better go... update soon!
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Title: cuz....
Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cuz i think he is HOT!!! i mean on FIRE...holy cow, i need some water..Anyways, i go for the bad boys...anything bad, or evil i go for, so as you might tell i also like: Marik, and Bakura!!! HOT DANG!!! ~Thankz for ya'lls reviews and keep it up!! ~~Tamra
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