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| "Acecombat: dawn of Eva" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Warhawk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 06:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I have not read the fic but i Love that game
| Title: Ace Writer 04
Reviewed By: AC04 Fanboy On: May 29, 2004 11:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another bang-up job old boy. I've not much to point out except for a little trick behind the OA-10. Despite its appearence, the OA-10 has a maximum fuselage strength of 22Gs, after that the plane will never fly again but that's the absolute max beating it can take...remember that next time a Mobius in a 'Hog is taking missiles on all sides from some Yellows >Grin
| Title: AC04 Fanboy
Reviewed By: Ace Writer 04 On: May 15, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well. Reading your fic, I am certainly impressed by your style of writing and by how you made a rather original little mission there. At least it wasn't a complete rip-off. Now. Just a few little details to point out: -Over Rigley, the Ace there flies an A-10 Thunderbolt. I had a little trouble with him in the F-5, but he's fairly easy meat with anything above that. -During Firewall, the appearence of the A-10 would've been a nice twist. Perhaps a rewrite inculding it would be nice? -As for your request. Just go by how you bought the planes as the levels progressed. Oh, and to deviate from the rigidity of the plot, throw in some planes that weren't in AC04, like the F-104, 105, or 108 (Look up the F-108, it's awesome), or some of the Chinese models like the JNG-8, 12, and 16.
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