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Reviewed By: turtle_Fire On: August 12, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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What's next? I can't wait for volumn two! Will there be more Duo torture? Keep the sweet things coming! Thanks for putting out your fics. I LOVE them all.
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Title: CH. 13
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooo. Excellent! So, Heero really is a psycho, right?
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Title: CH. 13
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooo. Excellent! So, Heero really is a psycho, right?
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been laughing all day at the spelling errors I committed criticizing your spelling. Teach me to type without coffee. Oh well. Hey, this story really takes off. The spelling/ grammAR and sentence structure is still confusing sometimes, and there were a few times when I wasn't sure what was happening, but even with all that, you Duo has me by the throat and won't let go. His dialog, and the way you make everyone else's so distinct and individual, is fantastic! You've got a great ear for that! .A lot of the expressions you use and the descriptions are just amazingly good, too. I'm totally baffled (in a good, want to read more way) by Heero. Good guy with poor social skills? Bad guy Duo secretly lusts after him too much to be smart with? Or is Duo just really, really nuts and his friends are actually good guys and we're only seeing them through his eyes? Who knows? (hope you do) Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gotta say, the spelling and grammer problems kept me away from this story for a while, and make the reading a bit difficult, too. But your dialogue is great and characteraztion seems good, too, so far. Good description of life on the station, too. Very gritty! Very good back story on Heero and Wufei, too. I'll be interested to see how they shape up in your world.
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Title: OI! sock Heero one for me, right between the eyes!
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 04:16 CDT
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MAN! heero is one sick ass motherfudgemumma!! GRR I wanna hit all those g-boys (except trowa). Go Duo Quat deserved dagger laced words, the little butt. I can't believe Wufei smirking and commenting on Duo like he's a piece not just meat but ass. I thought that Wufei ATLEAST didn't approve of heero forcing himself on Duo. I say that shit that happen to duo was nonconsenual and he was drunk the lank bastard took advantage of him... And quat of all people says NOTHING (the lil wuss), tro + quat DO nothing. i really hope Duo's friends will be there to take him home, screw Zechs the bastard setting him uo like that!! Oi, keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:37 CDT
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Hmm... I wonder what Heero's going to do to Duo... hehehe...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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me again, man this is angsty stuff, although there are a few misspellings this is a hell of a story. And Heero is a rat bastard. how can wufei side with heero like that...MAN how could Quat of all people!!! i couldn't believe Quat, sigh. I love this story by the way and it sucks so bad that Zechs turns out the be the ass that I thought he was and how DARE he call duo 'used goods'. MAN is yuy pissing me keep trying to DO duo... and SHooT! Duo's now all intoxicated... well totally wasted and he can't defended himself like he usually can. Can't Quat sense any of the hurt or violation that yuy's bringing on Duo with his damn space heart... oh I hope trowa realizes something's up and brings Quat with him to see what an ass Yuy is. SHit! Duo loves the rat bastard and he's forcing himself on him every chance he gets...damn...DAmn good story!! lol this is the most I've cused in a review but your story is contagious in a very good way.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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*giggles*.. i don't think I've ever seen 'shit' used soo many times in a fic lol, man!!! this is great can't wait for update!!
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: June 10, 2004 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, it is very creative and infectious. You have done a good job construct Duo's disarray mind and his despair. Please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: G0dD3zZi3 On: June 08, 2004 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm really hooked on your fic...keep up da good work!!
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Reviewed By: Cath Nye On: June 07, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read all of your fics so far and i love them all. Your fics are original and well writen! I'm so happy i found your fics... it was becoming increasingly hard to find anything new in this fandom... But yes... I really really hope you write more soon. From any or all of your fics. whispered_nothing@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: priscel (not signed in ) On: June 04, 2004 09:07 CDT
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this is good but I stop st 10 because ch 10 is missing! could ya email it to me or let me know when you reposted it and I'll be back to continue reading and offer a better review, 'kay? (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Hate Dept [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 01:20 CDT
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now this shit reminds me of a song....get out of my way cause you know that i am totaly wasted...or some shit like that...fuck that i love this mother fucker, though charlies all pissed cause i'm all slow as hell an shit. fuck i gotta finish it...if only i never needed to sleep
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 12:45 CDT
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pretty good story. i've never read one that had duo with that kind of attitude. i really like it. i can't wait to read the next chapter.
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