"Keeper of the Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Iceey1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:15 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Okay, use B. as in choice 2.AND PUT MY DANG CHARACTER IN...soon..pleaz. Oh...this is Rachel.
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Title: Blah Reviewed By: Llama On: November 06, 2004 13:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: BOOOOOO!!!! I love it... Um Chapter 2 I vote 2 and Chapter 3, I vote 2 lol. There ya go. Happy now?
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Reviewed By: llama123 On: July 24, 2004 11:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i like it, i do. really, its interesting and it keeps you reading... but you still owe me 10 bucks girly... i'll accept payment in a new chapter
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Reviewed By: llama On: May 18, 2004 19:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE IT! so far... Please, HURRY UP WITH YOUR HOMEWORK! AND GET IT DONE! i can't wait for the rest of the story, i hope her day comes out better.
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Reviewed By: Crystal M. On: May 18, 2004 19:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I think that your fic is interesting but I'm just not sure about your detail. Try using more just to give the reader a more complete picture of what's happening.
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