| "Somewhere Out There" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: what-knowabout-powerstione
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: July 15, 2009 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive-be-wodering-somethining-what-do-you-knoabout powerstione
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Title: thaht,s-not-mai-i-know-of mai-naver-gave-awy-haerip-lady
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: May 23, 2009 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yahh woh-mai-wood-naver-gave-awy-haeriplady bcsuse-haeriplady-really-dar-mai
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon of Egypt On: August 03, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD:*thunder roars in the skies of the draconian kingdom to express the rage it queen had*this is what i think of his death no one absolutely NO ONE SHALL HURT YUGI MOTOU AND GET AWAY WITH IT*changes into her dominatrix outfit with two iron silver diamond coasted whips tied at her waist and i dimond coated scimitar and a Daimond coated Naginata slung over her back*(i have my scimitar in my hand)now were are u SOB when im done with you not even your mother will recignize you *unleashes a battle cry and slices him to a bucn of pieces then revives him the cuts him in half with the naginata then revives him for the last time (he still has the pain from the last two attacks though so he will hurty all they way to his trip to anubi)then whips him to death and drags him down to anubis and watches with satisfaction as his judgment is given and he is sent to the creature for eternity and just when its seems it cant get worse for him he contantly has all three harpie ladies the BEWDs the REBD the DM the DMG and the Magician of black chaos Cyper Comander and Magician of Faith Constantly haunting his mind as they keep attacking him every night he is release from his prison to sleep for he gets no freedom not even in his dreams*aaaaaaah well now i feel better well thats my reaction to all this oh and if i were u id have yami summone slifer and the winged dragon of ra and have slifer blast him with a full blast of thunder force and let ra burn him alive then finish him off bye ^_^
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