| "Homecoming" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Xycan On: January 15, 2005 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still good as ever but the only thing I dont enjoy is the waiting! its like being deprived from something i need! I really did enjoy the last chappie!
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Title: Original
Reviewed By: Kansu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very good sense of style, I enjoyed it very much. Although you did have some grammar errors which could be easily fixed and some OOCness (mostly in Illumi) But you gave a good way of showing emotion on both characters and the kinky parts were comical on their own. I hope that you update soon on this. This fic is a rare one and I support it all the way.
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Reviewed By: Xycan On: July 26, 2004 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Intense in one part but it could do better by adding more passion onto the later chapters. Overall I felt like this one is great, much different from the other Illumi X Killua fics. I enjoyed it alot, update soon!
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Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drooool. I have no complaints against this...as long as it's one sided. Hahaa. Pleez update! i wanna read more! i mean, there aren't many HxH fics out there...
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