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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was very well written. There's a lot of emotion written down that had me really feeling for both of them. I read it twice because I enjoyed it so much. Excellent fic
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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just discovering Dragonball Z, having first seen GT. Since I am still in learning stage I am hardly an expert, however, this was a great fic. The characters were true to themselves, their personalities were spot on. Since I am just now watching the Frieza saga, I am seeing what Vegeta went through and the emotions you gave him fit very well. And Goku's baffled reaction and later acceptance were excellent. Well done. Going in search of more now!
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Title: Unlike anyother lemon that i ahve read befor
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say to this fic only that it was really well done in a sense that is was not one of those smut things.It was really well done and i'm happy to have read it.THe story was very touching and well i did not understand the lemon so much as to what was happening but i really don't care because this fic made me clams and gave me a sense of peacefilness and love all at the same time.Thx for writting such a excellent fic ur grammer by the way was really good. well any way great job and i can't wait to read and review some of ur other fisc...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 16:18 CDT
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The really odd thing is that this lemon wasn't done too badly. I kind of sensed that you hesitated a little on some areas, but it was still well written.
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Title: One-Shot
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plyric *utters a sigh* at the pure beauty of this story. It definitely left me with a calm feeling of love. It's so sweet. Beautiful, very beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 00:34 CDT
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awww thats was so adorable!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty kool story i liked it
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Reviewed By: EleneK *not logged in* On: May 15, 2004 13:09 CDT
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I love reading your V/G fics. They are filled with such emotion and are so descriptive they just suck you right in.
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Title: Vegeta's Mate
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very beautiful and insightful story, I hope to read more fic's from you in the near future.
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