| "PreTtY ToY" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Liei On: August 22, 2004 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is freakin messed up!!!! In the beginning I enjoyed the twist of Duo begin barely human and Heero being the drug addict. But then it got messed up and freakin SCARY. The dream Heero had of everyone being dead. I almost had to stop reading. You're twisted man, but I'm hooked. I'd like to know what brought about Duo's change. Hopefully a happy ending will become of this though I'm not sure how. Some grammer errors, but nothin other than that. Can't wait for the rest.
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: August 22, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Damn! this is awesome! Best Heero abuse I 'd ever read yet. Keep it up!!! Could you please reveal the reason Duo turned into what he is now?
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH. MY. GOD!!! That was so fuckin awsome. You have a twisted mind and i like that, it makes me feel good to know that im not the only one lol. Words can not explain how great that chapter was. And a scary but cool thing is, i listened to Metalica's 'Enter Sandman' when i was reading this.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is really good. I really hope you will have the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: July 03, 2004 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wicked Duo and a good dose of Heero abuse goes so well together. ;D
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Reviewed By: fallible On: July 02, 2004 21:58 CDT
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omFg....u r such a fucking talented writer! i luv ALL ur fiction! omg.....such....horrifying violence! i luv it! wonderful! ur story...it skipz around quite a bit....it would b very annoying if one didn't have all the other slow/boring/dry fic-shits to compensate for it... i luv this....u MUST keep up writing it....and ...did u do the one abou teh cage complex? if u did...update that too...srry too lazy to check, lol. either way....awesome awesome...can't wait for more....*demon grin*
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Title: cooli
Reviewed By: D-Kitty On: June 25, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! More plz??
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Reviewed By: Jyothi On: June 11, 2004 08:27 CDT
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ur fic is great. its usually duo who is a drug addict and heero that is barely human but ur role reversal has been pulledoff well.
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Reviewed By: Hate Dept [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 21:50 CDT
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eh i think some of the reviews got removed in the reposting...so if yours did sorry...i let everyone speak their mind and won't censor it so if ya want write one again
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 17:18 CDT
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This story is pretty good plot wise. You might wanna get a beta reader though, I've noitced a lot of grammer errors. Also you do know that you posted the same chapter back to back just with different endings?
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Reviewed By: Hate Dept [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 01:15 CDT
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aw dude yeah this shit is fucked up man...haha yeah it's a fucking trip, but ya gotta quit messin with that other shit and get on it....hehe yeah this stories fuckin sweet thanks for the reveiws maufakus
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Reviewed By: chibi_libra810 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
s'alright, like the writing style quite a lot, you might wanna check spelling and grammar a bit more though... i was wondering why you seem to like the word fuck so much *shrugs*
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy (Not signed in) On: May 17, 2004 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Is so speechless she can't even tell you how great your story is.*
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: May 15, 2004 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome! What a fantastic story! The sex and drugs are so delicious here! I love your dark Duo, he is so powerful. Please update soon!!
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