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"Bereft" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: priscel -not logged in  On: May 19, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow...I kind of wish there was more, that Duo afamed god of death would be just that in his death and breathe life. to see his Heero dying because he has no one, nothing to live for and then stop him and they'd be together fighting heaven and earth to find solace and the warmth that love can give. But no... I feel that would spoil it. This is so beautifully tragic both dying in love unannounced... darn it!! i only hope that in this particular fic they find each other and are happy. Well done, (^_^)
 Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 15, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent. I usually hate deathfics but I read another story of yours and liked it. But this made me cry because of the 'What ifs?' Something that happens in real life too often. I have only liked a handful of Deathfics and this is one of the best because of the way you described the emotion Heero was pouring out of his heart over 'what ifs?' and 'if onlys'. I am very impressed with your style of writing. I know nothing of grammar so I can't comment on it but I look forward to more of your fics. I am an avid fan of 1 x 2 stories. Shae-chan

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