| "Your Adventure In The Naruto World" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno Sasuke's a deeper kisser but Itachi's a dark strong tongue kisser. hehe. The two bro's r hot. o^.^o Great story man .
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Reviewed By: uchihasasuke16 On: October 01, 2004 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OF COURSE SASUKE WAS A WAY BETTER KISSER!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELEIVE YOU MADE ME KISS (EWW....) ITACHI!!!!!!!!!! EWW......... ITACHI GERMS NO MY FIRST KISS STOLEN BY (EWW...... JUST SAYING HIS NAME IS NASTY.) ITACHI!!!!!!!! GAH........ GONNA DIE ITACHI GERMS SPEARDING!!! *DEAD* FUNERAL MY GRAVE STONE: DIED 2004 BECAUSE OF (EWW....JUST WRITNG HIS NAME IS NASTY)ITACHI GERMS. HAHA JUST KJ BUT IF THAT REALLY HAPPENS I WOULD REALLY DIE. TRUST ME. EWW...XP LOL.
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Title: ~it's very enjoying~
Reviewed By: kanaru On: August 08, 2004 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE VERY TALENTED, KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i think it's cooler than youXNEJI because i love NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Dragon of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That *sniff*was ...so *Sinvel* beautifuuuuull*waahh*!
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Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: Hikari Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
soooooo sweet! ^_^. I likey!
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Reviewed By: Ceres-Firedemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry if 'Kio' is an overused nickname but it's mine too. I just made it from the top of my head using the first two letters of my real name. I'm really sorry if other people have the same nickname. I didn't realize it's so popular. I just made it up. BTW, I love SasukeXreader fics! ^^ This ones no exception.
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Reviewed By: SaJira On: May 22, 2004 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay dis is d 1st fic u finished. congrats!!!!!!!! en wat bout d other naruto fic? Ryoken ;)
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Reviewed By: cLOuD LOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think sasuke would be a great kisser and itachi um i think he would be great if he dosen't kill you first.and i think you should't of stoped but it was good!!
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Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhmmmm...well, I think that it moved a little too fast, maybe you should spend a litttle more time on the writng...errr...I mean, I dunno.....also, I think that Sasuke acted really out of character. I know that this is your story and everything, but it somehow didn't seem to flow right. oh well. keep going!
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Reviewed By: cLOuD LOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good right more!!!!to bad it wasen't a youxneji.I LOVE NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiten1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 14:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update!
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Reviewed By: Rainstormchica77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!! YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiten1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a excellent story Please update
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!!!!! Muhahahaha Sasuke mushy-ness stuff!!!
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