| "Twisted Love" Reviews/Comments [ 186 ] |
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 20:07 CDT
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I don't mean to be mean but, that was really confusing. sry
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Title: Confuzzled but Loving it... Bewitched by Story
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The title says it all... Towards the endings of this story- the time skips had gotten very confusing and then the general plot got confusing as the readers were never allowed to find out what the hell happened at that final battle with Naraku and who the hell the hidden evil was... but despite all this confusing I have to say this was the most intriguing story I have ever read... partially because I love the creation of certain characters and then there's that amazing personality twist you get along with the multiple plot wrenches thrown in when everything seems all happy! Great job with suspense but not so great with clearity- you kept me on my toes but still left my unanswered questions about some characters- but they don't matter so much... It was a great fic and I'm happy to have come across it even if it's gone or missing... I especially love how the characters seem so realistic yet so supernatural (ie: Kye reading anime fanfics online and then the sword fighting) I had so much fun reading this fic and wouldn't mind reading it again- I was sorta disappointed to not be able to find Ardent but it's my lost I suppose... Awesome story! I absolutely loved it and can't wait to read other works by you!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 20:07 CST
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Jesse is so odd. And I thought they were away from the huntress? And baddest? Bad grammar...
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 20:05 CST
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Ummm... if I told my mom some girl was after me she would a) call the police b) call the school c) tell me I'm overreacting d) withdraw me from the school. Not send me to some other country!
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Title: Great STORY!!
Reviewed By: IYsMateKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! can u make a sequel??? PLS??? lol well i really enjoyed reading it.... HAVE A NCE DAAAY!!!
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Reviewed By: Suikidoen On: July 20, 2006 21:58 CDT
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i have a bad feeling about wut kikyo's planning O.o...i skared
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Title: meeeeeeeeeee
Reviewed By: danielle swampy On: March 05, 2006 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sup ma hommies i love inuyasha so much and kagome and inuyasha belong together
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Reviewed By: e.j. On: February 04, 2006 19:12 CST
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Yeah, Im sure Kikyo would kill Sango over that. You should have drawn it out, ya know, make it a STORY.
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Title: twisted love
Reviewed By: teenofinulove On: September 02, 2005 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i haven't read the whole thing yet...uh actually only the first chapter, but i read inbetween and stuff and it just grabbed me! to me, it's such a great idea, now keep in mind i've only seen the first chapters and bits, so if i get this wrong, my apoligize. the fact that there in school and just living the normal life, it's great, and from what i read, you are such a tanlented write, i even copied it down so i can read it over and over again! can't wait til the sequel!
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Title: Twisted Love *my story!*
Reviewed By: Beauty2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 11:17 CDT
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yeah, uh, who cares? it's a story...either way, they wanted land, so whatever....-_-
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Title: You need to read up on your history
Reviewed By: Lordsesshomaru 2 On: August 27, 2005 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Japan wanted to conquer China and used the Manchuria Incident to attack. It didn't have anything to do with trade or buying land. Well, they wanted land, but they wanted it for free.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! can't believe that this story is actually over. please keep up the great work. I loved this story and i can't wait to read more of your other storeis. Krystal.!
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 22:05 CDT
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excellent story...great job...hope to see more stories like these soon...great work..
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Reviewed By: Beauty2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:09 CDT
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ewww Naraku is a sick bastard ooo please please please up-date fast and i mean really really really really really really really really really fast i hace to find out what happens^_^
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