Title: Spellcheck and grammar
Reviewed By: ChibiHorsewoman On: June 05, 2004 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
If your spelling and grammar were better I would have enjoyed this story a bit more. You actually misspelled Duo in one of your sentances. If you improve on that I believe you could improve teh story
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