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Reviewed By: KyleBroflovski3 On: August 09, 2004 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Kyo is my fave! I can't wait till the next chapt
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that waz great. you are on my favorites never to be deleted,^_^... um yeah^_^; anyway. PLZ update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Lucamin On: August 04, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was great! Ah, I love an uke Kyou! I hope you have an update in the works!
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Reviewed By: Molly "Bobcat" On: August 04, 2004 20:33 CDT
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Wow! this is really good so far! Also one of the best jobs of matching a song to the fic in Ch 3. the song seems to follow the events in the fic, not the other way around. Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Lady Moon On: August 03, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. I like it very much. Please update soon. Pleasssseeee????? *beg, beg*
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Reviewed By: RedRose On: August 01, 2004 20:39 CDT
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Awwww poor Kyou, I hope you write more. I'll be lookign forward to it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 05:07 CDT
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Hey-hey-hey, why haven't you been updating?
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Reviewed By: Kikvws On: July 17, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Amazing! Great little ficcie you wrote, one of my absolute favs; even across fandoms!
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 09:14 CDT
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Why hasn't there been more you sadist? Dammit Kyou, you're breaking Yuki's heart here, you stubborn prick, and I normally take your side in the comics too! MORE!
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Reviewed By: macbaby1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! Yuki, Yuki, stay away from that Haru....he is nothing but trouble!! Please don't break poor Kyou's heart by having Yuki cheat with Haru. Update soon! We need our yaoi!
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Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It is so very sexy but at the same time it has this sweetness that makes it irresistible. I enjoy the way you develop the feelings of the characters and also play off of the original fellings from the anime. The story has a good flow. It takes it's time and is not rushed. I hate it when stories are rushed. My only suggestion to you is more updates. You can't keep me in suspense like this, it's killing me. Great job and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Shoko(Child of Ice) On: July 02, 2004 14:10 CDT
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ohhh that was FUN! Kyo finally GOT A CLUE~! And yes! Tohru is ever sweet and helpful!! Yay!! Good job Mistress^.~ (lol)
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 15:52 CDT
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You take me into the story and just drown me in good writing... This story is mesmerizing. Keep it up or fear the wrath of the fanfic-deprived Chibi! I really do adore this story.
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Reviewed By: PandorasFallen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 15:23 CDT
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I'm so happy that you updated this! I read Chapter 4 about a week ago, and thoroughly enjoy this story as a whole. You've done an amazing job portraying Kyou and Yuki, and I can't wait to see Chapter 6. ^_^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 01:02 CDT
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Damn, I didn't review last time! Anyway, lemon? Good. Very good. Anything with boy/boy love is usually good. Very yummy. Kyo, glad to see you've finally figured out that you like Yuki. So why did you go out with Tohru! ;_; Damn it! Now I'll be sad till I read the next chapter.
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