| "A Fine Line" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH my GOD girl come on you must update this story. its been four years! come on! ill freakn update it for you! i have so many ideas running through my brain!!! OH MY GOD!!! update woman please!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 10:14 CDT
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you evil evil person! how dare you start such a woderful story and then leave us all with a flipping cliffhanger!!!! EVIL!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yuni On: September 03, 2005 17:05 CDT
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I love this story! Please write on soon! Sorry for my language, I´m only german!
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 02:03 CDT
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I absolutly LOVE this story! How could you leave it there like that! How dare you! I would like to express my love for this story and say how well I think you have characterize Kyou and Yuki. This really is a very touching story. I wish you all the best and sincerely hope you update as soon as possible. I al hope to see more work from you in the future with this pairing!
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Reviewed By: YukiSoma On: July 04, 2005 23:20 CDT
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loveit simply delish..cant believe that i came across this just now...when are you gonna continue this?...
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Reviewed By: KAWAII YASHA (not logged in) On: June 22, 2005 13:39 CDT
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PLZ Use "vindicated " from dashboard confessions in the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Angel12 On: March 02, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story so much... or at least until I read that crushing ending.???? How could you possibly end a wonderful story like that (cries) HA HA HA sorry, didn't mean to be such a critic.................. but still, I was so upset that Kyo did not tell Yuki how he feels!!!! You must write a sequel(pretty please??) lol
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Title: Aaaah!!!
Reviewed By: The Cookie Goddess On: February 27, 2005 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaah!!!! OhmygodifyoudonotupdatesoonIthinkIamgoingtoburstyouareasuchagoodwriterandaa ah!!! *calms down* I got this link off a site with recommended Fruits Basket fics and man am i glad i read this! I can't *believe* how great this story is. I mean, talk about a non-canon pairing. You did it so perfectly I'm just...wow. The way you build up the tension is excruciatingly squirmy (when characters are in embarrassing situations Iget embarrassed along with them ^_^U) and deliciously HOT (lol). I mean, god dammit! When Yuki had his hand under the table and was making Kyo come when everyone else was there?! I had to take a break from reading because its so intense. I loved the notes Yuki left him! I can't even begin to describe it. I mean this fic had the perfect combo- a frustrated, hopelessly-in-lust Kyo who denies his attraction while trying to ward off thoughts of doingYuki, and a seducing, *audacious*, somewhat smug/evil Yuki who has no qualms of informing Kyo(in public, i might add)of his desire. This is one hot fic you have here, darlin'. And its nice that this actually sounds feasible *mockgasp*-I hate it when some authors(just decide to pair up two characters(or throw 'em in bed together)without any follow-up or 'foreplay',as it were. You balance the great sex with a great plotline and character tension. Honestly, I'm just wondering if Shigure knows(can't he smell it or sumthin? or at least hear their noises?). Can't wait till your nxt chappy! Keep writing!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 01:22 CST
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*coughs* *coughs again* *COUGHS* Where's the next chapter...?
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Reviewed By: Tentomushi13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY WOULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT? THATS TORTURE!! I feel so mad but since I am so happy and stuff from reading it I cant think of anything else but Kyo and YUKI making hot gay man SEX! Anyway I think it was AWSOME!! I had lost of fun reading it and I hope to read more stuff from you (well if it is Kyo/yuki or kyo/haru :blush: Yup yup ^_^ :waves: got to go dream my night away with dirty thoughts ^_~
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Reviewed By: oilcake On: January 22, 2005 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic and would love to see you update it! There has to be more!
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 13:48 CST
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**Blinking in astonishment** Wow, I've looked far and wide for a decent YukiXKyo... and I've finally found it! Really, really, really good!! Keep going... PLEASE!!! >^-^
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Reviewed By: Cassial Darkblade On: November 18, 2004 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lOVE IT!!!!
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Title: wooooooho
Reviewed By: * On: November 08, 2004 20:05 CST
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i loved it !, you got to type the other part!!1 Kisses * ^.~
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:11 CDT
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*Crys* Was having a bad day today and when i started to read ur fic one night and than i had to get off so then i had to wait until i got home form a really crappy day and ur fic just made it even better thx.I love this fic and wish that Kyo would get hit in the head just to see what he is missing with Yuki and all.Plz update soon and i really love how u did this pairing.Good work and Update soon.
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