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"Love Without Fear" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ]
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 Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2004 12:21 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh - why do you people post fics?? *Cries* Now I have to try and think of WHY I liked the fic, when all I can usually think of is, "Because I did." That's it... That's as intelligent as I get in reviews... :( Umm, it was VERY well written, very plausible, very enjoyable and I'm looking forward to the next chapter - I hope you do manage to update regularly... Hmmm, with this lack of Literary skills, I could be a new Superhero... "Poor Quality Review Gurl"!!! OK... no more coffee for me today... LOVED the story and looking forward to more... :D
 Title: oh no! oh yes!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 17, 2004 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's up! I'm very excited about this story, Lisa! The set-up is completely believable and I love the way you ended the chapter with Vegeta saying "Lead the way" ( resonating with that line and his whole pride goeth before the fall stuff in the Brolly movie!) I want tohate to see Vegeta being such an ass but then again, he has always been one, and I've loved him for it too! Fascinating that you are exploring this ground and this time period, where there is so much up for speculation and where I suspect, knowing V&B, there was no Cinderella story ending but a vibrant, constantly maturing relationship. debbiechan
 Title: love without fear
Reviewed By: mlf  On: May 16, 2004 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow good story.can't wait for more chaps...maria
 Reviewed By: bluejade  On: May 16, 2004 07:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
in a way it is a good story but if this a B/V breakup i stop reading it
 Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - Not logged in  On: May 16, 2004 05:28 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I half expected the "other woman's" name to be Lisa! Very well written. Totally believable that Vegeta would turn to someone else for what he needs (physically & emotionally) with Bulma shutting him out. Good start.
 Reviewed By: joline  On: May 16, 2004 04:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
I've read some stories about infidelity before, but this is the first that accutaly made sense. very good.
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