Reviewed By: Reiannah On: September 01, 2004 12:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Okay, it seems that I'm giving all tens to everyone that I review, but that's not due to flattery or laziness... it's b/c I'm only willing to take the time to review the absolute best fics otherwise I refuse to waste my time. And yours is one of the best. I loved it, enjoyed it thoroughly, and am drooling with anticipation for the next chapter. The whole part where we find out that Ryuichi used to be with Taki was heartbreaking. Poor Ryu-chan, having to deal w/ that jerk! Yeah, I hate Taki... I rarely read any fics that portray him as anything but an @$$hole. There are so many twists and turns in your plot, it literally had me squealing like a fangirl. Demo, onegai onegai do NOT have Shuichi and Hiro get together... especially now that Yuki is getting his life and his act together! That'd be just too sad and I'd cry! *hugs Yuki and author* Pocky and Ramune soda for you! Great job... can't wait to read more! Until next time... ja ne!
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